Dohraaye Hue Lafz (Shikha) -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Shikha12

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«Reply #15 on: January 23, 2008, 11:30:56 AM »

Quote from: BHONDU on January 21, 2008, 04:03:05 PM

bahut khoob sikha ji...

apni tilmilahat per kuch sabr laaya jaaye.
bheegti in aankho ko ab chup karaya jaye.

bejaan hoti fariyaad berang chehra dekhker.
dard se hi sahi ab muskuraya jaaye.

khali lagte hai agar dard mein na ho halchal,
to dard ko hi apne ab sataya jaaye.

khud syaah homohabbat mein tajgi rahi..
isliye yaroon ab khud ko jalaya jaaye...

Bahut Khoob... Usual Smile

आप कहते है तो मुस्कुरा देते है..
नक़ाब से चेहरे को सज़ा लेते है..

कौन दोहराए इन रूठे लफ़्ज़ों को,
खुद ग़ज़ल अपनी गुनगुना लेते है..

गुमसुम सा दिखाई देता है चाँद,
आज सितारों से इसको मिलवा देते है..

फिर ना टकराए उनसे भीगी पलकें,
बहला के बारिशो को बुला लेते है..

घर से हटा दिए सब आईने हमने,
ये बेरहम सच्चाई बता देते है..

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Aap kehte hai to muskura dete hai..
Naqaab se chehre ko saja lete hai..

Kaun dohraaye in roothe lafzon ko,
Khud gazal apni gunguna lete hai..

Gumsum sa dekhaai deta hai chaand,
Aaj sitaaron se isko milwa dete hai..

Phir na takraaye unse bheegi palkein,
Behla ke baarishon ko bula lete hai..

Ghar se hata diye sab Aaine humne,
Ye Be-rehem Sachhai bata dete hai.. Usual Smile


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Shikha12

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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #16 on: January 23, 2008, 11:54:26 AM »

Quote from: HumTum is back on January 22, 2008, 12:12:55 PM

Nice one Shikha Ji .... kucch pesh hai !!

Be-waffai ki aag mein aaj apna dil jalayien hum
Ae’ Dil chal ab GumooN ki mehfil sajayein hum

AshkooN mein mila kar apna gum pee jaye hum
Kuch apni sunayoN tum, kuch apni sunayien hum

Tum hum mein samao aur tum mein samayien hum
Chalo na aaj ishq ki ik nayi reet chalayein hum

Ab aur kya kissi se Marasim badayein hum
Yeh bhi bahut hai tujh ko agar bhul jayien hum

Raahein juda hai jiski, maanzil hai juda humse
Kyun kar uss ajnabi ko apne paas bulayien hum?

Who log ab kha hai ke jo kehte the sir-phiraaa ?
Hai kitne sir-phiree, chalo aaj unko batlayein hum

Who shaks jo chala gya tha mujh ko keh kar alwida,
Aa jaye to uske raastoN mein sitare bichayein hum

Jiski yaadien satati rehti hai shab-o-roz humko
Jee mein aata hai ke ab usko bhi satayein hum

Kha dekhein honge usne hum jasseey bhi dewane
Chot dil pe kha kar , labooN se muskuraye hum !!!

Superb One HumTum...

My Try...

इसी सर-ज़मीन में छुपा मिलेगा खुदा भी,
इश्क़ की निशानियाँ हर दिल पर लगायें हम…

नासमझ है, रूठे है, सुनते ही नही वो तो,
बेचैन मन से अपनी पाज़ेब बजायें हम…

है मुहब्बत भी, शिकवे और शिकायतें भी,
रूठे हुओ को रूठ कर ही मनायें हम…

ख़ाक ना हो आशियाँ कही शक़ शुबाह में,
उठते हुए हवा में अंगार दिखायें हम…

करवट किए जाग रहा तन्हाई लपेटे खुद से,
चाँद को थप्पकीयाँ दे देकर सुलायें हम…

कोई और तन्हा ना रहे, हमारे जाने के बाद,
धुएँ से बादलों के भी साए बनायें हम…

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Isi sir-zameen mein chhupa milega khuda bhi,
Ishq ki nishaaniyaa har dil par lagaayein hum…

Nasamajh hai, roothe hai, sunte hi nahi wo to,
Bechain mann se apni paajeb bajaayein hum…

Hai muhabbat bhi, Shikve aur shikayatein bhi,
Roothe huon ko rooth kar hi manaayein hum…

Khaak na ho aashiyaa kahi shak shubaah mein,
Utthte hue hawa mein angaar dikhaayein hum…

Karwat kiye jaag raha tanhaai lapete khud se,
Chand ko thapkiyaan de dekar sulaayein hum…

Koi aur tanha naa rahe, humare jaane ke baad,
Dhhue se baadlon ke bhi saaye banaayein hum…


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #17 on: January 23, 2008, 12:09:46 PM »

too good shikha..really nice one from you..
nice replies by all


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #18 on: January 23, 2008, 12:41:42 PM »

Quote from: Shikha12 on January 23, 2008, 11:30:56 AM

Aap kehte hai to muskura dete hai..
Naqaab se chehre ko saja lete hai..

Kaun dohraaye in roothe lafzon ko,
Khud gazal apni gunguna lete hai..

Gumsum sa dekhaai deta hai chaand,
Aaj sitaaron se isko milwa dete hai..

Phir na takraaye unse bheegi palkein,
Behla ke baarishon ko bula lete hai..

Ghar se hata diye sab Aaine humne,
Ye Be-rehem Sachhai bata dete hai..[/color][/b][/size][/font] Usual Smile

bahut aacha likha hai Sikha ji....per

Agar kabhi aap humare kehne per muskurana,
to dua hai naqab ka chehra mat lagana.

chahe raho sabeke saath, ya tanhaayee mein,
gazal aapne man ki hi gungunana....

chand ki roshni ki tareef sabhi kerte hai.
tum unhe sitaron ki chamak bhi dikhana..

behte hue ashq to her naqaab cheen lete hai,
us samay bhool ke bhi barish ko na bulana...

aapne aap ko dekhker aapna ehsaash mila hai.
khuda k liye aaino ki maujudgi mat hatana..


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #19 on: January 23, 2008, 01:17:36 PM »

Again a Nice one Shikha Ji ....

Kyun kisi ko apne, zakham dhikayein hum
Kudh apni hi mout ka matham manayein hum

Aaj woh silsila-e-ishq khatam kar aaye hum
Who kehte the ke un par sitam dhayein hum

Sehra-e-zindagi mein, haye! koi dusra na tha
Sunte rhe hai aap hi, kudh apni sadayien hum

Who ke jisko muhhobat ka koi ilam hi nahin,
Ya khuda! Kis tarah se usko samjhayein hum

Iss zindgi míen itni bhi frahgat kisse naseeb?
Itna naa yaad Aa ke tujhe bhool jaayein hum

Ishq karne ki bhala iss se badi saza kya hogi?
Be-waffai kii tumne magar, sharmayein hum !!


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #20 on: January 24, 2008, 12:43:50 PM »

Quote from: Shikha12 on January 21, 2008, 02:52:41 PM

Koi nahin duniya mein dard ko churaane wala,
Toh dard se kyon naa ghar ko sajaayein hum…

Yun hi diye jaate hai wo dil ko dilaase jhoothe,
Chalo kahaaniyon se apna dil behlaayein hum…

Reit ka ek tinka tha wo jo bheega gaya palkein,
Is bahaane kuch ashkon ka bojh hataayein hum…

Thak gaye hai hum bhi dohraaye hue lafzon se,
Dard ke siwaa sunaayein to kya sunaayein hum…

Is baar khaamosh hi raheinge, aisa socha to hai,
Zeher-e-gum muskuraahat mein milaayein hum…

Haath aayi bus zakhm lapete lamhon ki yaadein,
Waqt ke peeche khade daaman phelaayein hum…

Yu shikast paayi hai apni hi zindagi ke haathon,
Maut ke liye karne lage hai laakh duaayein hum…

Wah Kya Baat Hai SHIKHA.. Bahut Khooooooob.. Such hi Likha Hai Tumne..
Dard se Kyun Na Ghar ko Sajaayen Hum.. Bahut hi Umda Soch Ke Sath
Likha Hai.... Daad Kubool Karen Lajwab Shayara Ji..!! Usual Smile

Vicky


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #21 on: January 24, 2008, 04:09:05 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob dost kavi, HumTum ji and Shikha... kamal ka likh ahai sabhi ne!!! Good job by all!!!


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #22 on: January 25, 2008, 06:33:13 AM »

Quote from: Shikha12 on January 21, 2008, 02:52:41 PM

Nice one shikha.... Nice replies by all.... Usual Smile


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #23 on: January 26, 2008, 06:30:09 PM »

Bahut sundar likha hai Shikha ji,

zindagi ko yun apney se juda bhi na karo
ki ajnabi ban jaaye zindagi
reh jaaye ek sawaal bankar
dhoondhein jawaab hum pal pal
zindagi ke saath chalo tho
sanvarti jaaye zindagi
per jub bigad jaaye
tho saath kaisey chalein
shayad imtihaan
leti hai zindagi


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #24 on: January 26, 2008, 06:36:37 PM »

Khuda rakhthey hain har pal ka hisaab
jo kathin guzaar di zindagi
socho Khuda kya denge uska jawaab

phool ban jaaye zindagi
kaantey karein gila


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #25 on: January 26, 2008, 09:47:26 PM »

NICE shikha ji ..


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #26 on: January 27, 2008, 12:22:11 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB, SAB NE EK SE BADHKAR EK LIKHA..EK KOSHISH KUCH LIKHNE KI...

KYA KHABAR USS SHAKS KO MAIN BHI BAHUT BECHAIN HOTA HOON
CHUPKAR TANHAI MEIN KAHIN AKELE MEIN ROTA HOON...

JHOOTE DILAASO SE MAN APNA BHI NAHI BEHAL SAKA,
AB TO BAS KAANTO BHARI NEEND,
AANKHON MEIN RAKH KAR SOTA HOON..
JAB BHI KHWAAB DEKHTHA HOON USS SHAKS KE ZOR-ZOR SE ROTA HOON...

BAHUT ASAAN HAI YEH SAB KE LIYE,KISI KO BHI BEWAFA KEH DENA,
KYA KHABAR LOGON KO,
USKI JUDAI MEIN CHAIN-SUKOON MAIN HAR PAL KHOTA HOON..

WAQT KE HAATH SE KUCH YUH MAAT KHA GAYI APNI KISMAT
KE SOCHTHA THA,JAB BHI MILENGE,
MERI MAJBOORI KYA THI,UNHE SUNAUNGA
JAB BHI UNSE PAAS JAANE KE LIYE UTHAYE HAI KADAM
AUR BHI DOOR....BAHUT DOOR UNSE HOTA HOON

DOHRAAYE HUE LAFZ KO PHIR DOHRAANE SE KUCH NAHI HASSIL
SAB YEH KEHTE HAI MUJHSE,MAIN BHI JAANTA HOON..
PAR YUH SAMJLO UNKI JUDAAI KO SEH NAHI SAKTA,
PYAAR MEIN UNKE CHOT KHAAKAR AB INSAAN NA RAHA
WAHI PURANE LAFZ KO DHORAANE WALA TOTA HOON

PYAAR MEIN "KHWAISH" MUJHE USS SHAKS SE KOI SHIKAYAT NAHI
MERI HI BADNASEEBI KE SADKE MAIN ROTA HOON....


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #27 on: January 30, 2008, 02:18:01 AM »

bahut hi umda kalaam likha hai aapne khawish ji...per

aapni badnaseebi ke sadke kabhi mat rona ,
ki naseeb kabhi badneeb nhi hota hai...
jaanta hai wahi pyaar ke rang ko,
jo uski khusi ke liye khd ko ashqo mein dubota hai.
log kehte hai us insaan ko bewafa per wo bewafaa kaha
wo to aaj bhi ghar per chain ki need sota hai.
jub ehsaash nhi usay dard ka kisi ke to kya samjhegi wo pyaar ka ehsaash,
to tu kyn uski bejaan yaadon ka zaher dhota hai
aapni badnaseebi ke sadke kabhi mat rona ,
ki naseeb kabhi badneeb nhi hota hai...


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #28 on: February 20, 2008, 10:23:26 AM »

Wow... so many comments here.. glasses2

Thanks a lot Shona, Bhondu ji, HumTum, Vicky , Pooja di, Jagdish, Kohinoor, Faiiz_76 and Khwaish...

Very Very Nice Replies Bhondu ji, HumTum, Kohinoor and Khwaish...

So sorry for not replying in time.. but I will try to reply everyone very soon...


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Re: Dohraaye Hue Lafz

«Reply #29 on: February 20, 2008, 10:39:55 AM »

Quote from: BHONDU on January 23, 2008, 12:41:42 PM

Very Nice Reply Bhondu Ji... Usual Smile

सितारों की रोशनी बहुत मद्धम है,
चाँद का अक्स अभी उन पर भारी है...

बारिशों के मौसम लगे सुहाने से,
हर बहता अश्क़ कहता है, वो अभारी है..

इन में नज़र आता है अपना अकेलापन,
फिर भी इन्ही आइनो से हमारी यारी है..

है दर्द से लबालब ये सीमाओं तक,
हद-ए-निगाह आँसुओ की फुलवारी है..

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Sitaaron ki roshni bahut maddham hai,
Chaand ka aks abhi un par bhaari hai...

Baarishon ke mausam lage suhaane sey,
Har behta ashq kehta hai, wo abhaari hai..

In mein nazar aata hai apna akelapan,
Phir bhi inhi aaino se humaari yaari hai..

Hai dard se lab-a-lab ye seemaao takk,
Hadd-e-nigaah aansuo ki fulwaari hai..


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