---Doobta hua ik kasti hai---

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Sabra ka paimaana toot raha
--iss khaak ko ab Dishad kar de

tamannaon ke thapede hain kuch
--umangon ko jara shant kar de

doobta hua ik kasti hai
--isse Maajhi ke naam kar de

ik trishna hai kastoori jaisi
--sachh ka koi Saaman bhar de

dhara ki gahraiyon me,
dafan ho raha KB
--wajeeb sa Anjaam kar de !!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2011, 11:39:25 AM »
kya baat.... kahi hai kb...
too good.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2011, 12:04:23 PM »
thanx priya--
aapse hi to seekha hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2011, 12:10:54 PM »
hahaha.... mujhe chane ke jhaad par chada rahe ho....
gir gayi na to tumhari khair nahi kb.....
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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2011, 12:11:29 PM »
bohut khoob kilbil ji very nice lines likhtey rahiye aise hi hameshan
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2011, 01:10:02 PM »
BAhaut bahaut khoob KB jee..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2011, 01:13:52 PM »
sukriya Rahim dost.
aapko pasand aya bas bahut hai.
aur Sahil ji aapka behad sukriya aapne bhi saraha mujhe.
Priya ji--aap mano ya na mano yahi sach hai
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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2011, 01:21:23 PM »
bahut khob
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2011, 04:19:39 PM »
Quote from: killbill on February 01, 2011, 11:33:13 AM
Sabra ka paimaana toot raha
--iss khaak ko ab Dishad kar de

tamannaon ke thapede hain kuch
--umangon ko jara shant kar de

doobta hua ik kasti hai
--isse Maajhi ke naam kar de

ik trishna hai kastoori jaisi
--sachh ka koi Saaman bhar de

dhara ki gahraiyon me,
dafan ho raha KB
--wajeeb sa Anjaam kar de !!!

Very Nice Creation ... ! dil se daad !!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2011, 04:43:11 PM »
wahhhhhhhh KB bht gehri baatein likh di aaj to tumne......bht mast post hai ...maza aaya re padhkar
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2011, 05:16:26 AM »
sukriya kishan.
aapka sukriya.
khus rahiye
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2011, 05:17:46 AM »
Ansumali ji aapka teh dil se sukriya
aapne pasand kiya .
khus rahiye janaab
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2011, 05:19:12 AM »
bahut khub KBji... badiya...
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2011, 05:20:01 AM »
Kasakk -- u ka bhi bhot bhot sukrguzaar hun ji.
u ne i ka hausala badhaya.
issi baat ka Dili sukriya
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2011, 01:09:52 PM »
Bahut Khub KB JI
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