DOORI_______Baadal

by baadal102 on November 21, 2008, 02:58:47 PM

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baadal102

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Majboori wo apni roj batate rahe,
Doori wo humse roj badathe rahe,

Paas aane ki jitni bhi ki koshish,
Wo humse utna hi door jaate rahe,

Nahi bataya kabhi kisi majboori ko,
Sirf chup rahne ka wasta wo dete rahe,

Kiya tha jis ne wada jindgi ke safar ka,
Wo alag hi apna janha basane ki sochte rahe,

Nahi socha kabhi humare baare mai kaatil ne,
Humare khun se wo sirf apni neeve sinchte rahe,

Humare khun se wo sirf apni neeve sinchte rahe........

Baadal


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ***DOORI***---------Baadal

«Reply #1 on: November 21, 2008, 03:55:30 PM »

Nice work badal

Kis ko kya batate ke sanam harjaiee hai
Sari duniye hame uski thokar me nazar aayee hai

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Pooja

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Re: ***DOORI***---------Baadal

«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2008, 06:51:33 PM »

wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Baadal ji..

Nice lines SG


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baadal102

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Re: ***DOORI***---------Baadal

«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2008, 05:52:52 AM »

thanx a lot pooja ji
N
bahut khoob ghayel ji Applause

Baadal


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saloni bharani

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Re: DOORI_______Baadal

«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2008, 06:37:09 AM »

baadaj ji bahut acha likha han aapna
saloni


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pankshivam

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Re: DOORI_______Baadal

«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2008, 08:49:13 AM »

khub hain badal saheb
umda soch hai
keep it up


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baadal102

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Re: DOORI_______Baadal

«Reply #6 on: November 24, 2008, 05:47:50 AM »

thanx a lot saloni ji
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shivam ji

Baadal


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: DOORI_______Baadal

«Reply #7 on: November 24, 2008, 06:03:25 AM »

bohut khoob baadal ji Applause


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baadal102

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Re: DOORI_______Baadal

«Reply #8 on: December 04, 2008, 05:48:15 AM »

thanx a lot bhawna ji

Baadal


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Azeem Azaad

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Re: DOORI_______Baadal

«Reply #9 on: December 04, 2008, 11:36:18 AM »

Nice One Baadal Ji,.


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baadal102

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Re: DOORI_______Baadal

«Reply #10 on: December 04, 2008, 11:39:56 AM »

thanx J@@N JI

Baadal


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Re: DOORI_______Baadal

«Reply #11 on: December 04, 2008, 11:57:09 AM »

U Are Welcome,.

Dooriyaan Badhaane Ka Iraada Unka Tha,.
Yun To Milne Ke Raah Dikhaai Deti Thi,.

Unhone Awaaz Hi Na Di Hume, Manzil Pahonchkar,.
Hume To Unki Dil Ki Dhadkane Sunaai Deti Thi,.

Silsilaa Unhone Torda, Judaai Ka Failsa Unka Tha,.
Hum To Sadaa Unke Kareeb The, Darmiyaan Mein Faasla Unka Tha,.

______________________________-Jaanasheen-