Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil:Shayri-E-Dard

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doston aaj jo poem mein aapse share kar raha hoon woh teen parts mein hai....yeh poem nahin ek tarah se kahaani hai jisse sab ittefaaq rakehnge aisa mera maanna hai kyunki sabhi kii life mein aisa waqt jaroor aaya hoga jab dosti kii khatir oosne pyaar ko thukraaya hoga

do jism ek jaan hua karte thay
jab hum dost saath raha kartey thay
gham kii aahat bhi na hoti thi hamaare dar par
khushiyon se tallukaat hua kartey thay

phir ek roz mein oos pari se takraaya tha
jisne pehli nazar mein hi mere dil ko churaaya tha
aankhon mein bas gayi thi woh is kadar
kii har waqt rehta palkon mein uska saaya tha
bahut chanchal bahut massom woh pari thi
jisne mujhe apna banaya tha

pahuncha jab dost ko dil kii baat kehne,
oose mera intzaar karta paaya tha
maine jab kehna chaha ,oosse pahle
oosne mjhe ek tasveer ka chehra dikhaya tha

dekhta raha main oos chehre ko, meri pari ko
haan mere dost ka dil bhi isi nazneen par aaya tha
oosne kaha kii kaisi lagi meri pasand tujhko
toh maine ikraar mein sar ko hilaya tha
phir hansa tha mein khul k ek pal ko
lekin oos roz mera dost khokli hansi ko samajh na paaya tha


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2009, 06:39:44 AM »

doston usse aage kii kahaani likh raha hun shayad aap logonb ko pasand aaye...iska agla aur last part bhi jald hi pesh karoonga bataiyeha kaisa laga

phir kari koshishein mere dost ne uska dil lubhane kii
oos haseen ko apne dil kii duniya mein basane kii
sachchi thi uski mohabbat woh oose haasil huyi
par mohabbat k rang mein meri dosti na shamil huyi

kii badti rahi mohabbat aur dosti khoti rahi
mahino mein saalon mein ab mulaqaat hoti rahi
phir ek roz oose meine apna qalaam padta paaya tha
jisme maine apni ektarfa mohabbat ka kissa gumgunaya tha

pad kar mere qalaam woh kucch na bola mujhe
bas ek nigaah dal kar mere ghar se rukhsat hua
maine koshish kii bahut oose sach batane kii
magar woh mere sach se na muzafat hua

ooske dil mein khalish thi kii maine sach ko chhupaya tha
magar main sach kehne ka hausla juta na paaya tha
yakeen hai mujhe woh bhi yahi karta meri jagah
chunta wahi raasta jis par maine kadam badaya tha

chal diya main chhod kar phir apne sehar ko
chal diya mein tod kar rishton kii dor ko
bahut parshaan tha mein, kucch sukun chahta tha
apne liye bas thodi mohabbat chahta tha


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2009, 07:15:21 AM »

Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah aaj to dil kar raha hai ki bass u hi wah wah karte rahe, kya hi khoobsurat alfaaz aur khoobsurat dil-e-khayal nazar kiye hai aapne Salil Ji..!!!!

Umda Work Aur Lajawaab Lines..

Shally.


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salil2002

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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2009, 09:29:46 AM »

thanks a lot shally.........abhi kahaani ka ek aur part baaki hai ......koshish karoonga usko aur bhi behtar banane kii


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k.shael

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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2009, 09:32:24 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on June 03, 2009, 09:29:46 AM

thanks a lot shally.........abhi kahaani ka ek aur part baaki hai ......koshish karoonga usko aur bhi behtar banane kii

U R Welcome Salil Ji, Intzaar Rahega next Post ka..

Shally.


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2009, 10:47:13 AM »

doston yeh last part hai.....aap logon ne pasand nahinkiya iski wajah kucch na kucch jaroor hogi....doston yeh ek sach hai meri life ka jise share kara hai maine aapse

aa gaya tha door sabse par oonhe bhula na paaya tha
jinke saath maine ummra ka ek lamba daur bitaya tha
bahut kii koshish meine unhe bhulaane kii
ek arse k baad main kucch kaam yaab ho paaya tha

phir lauta mein oon galiyon aur chaubaron mein
magar ab kucch khalipan sa laga wahan
jahan mehfilein sajti thi wahan viraana tha
koi apna na dikha mujhko wahan

phir main mila apne dost se ,woh bahut dil se mila tha
laga hi nahin kii ek ummra gujri ho,ya usko ho mujhe gila tha
phir beithe oos shaam hum, chala khoob jaamon ka daur
phir oosne kaha mujhse, jo woh kissii se na keh saka tha

khat.m ho chuki ooski premkahaani
uski chahat ne usko chhala tha
woh nahin ja sakti thi apne babaul k khilaaf
isliye oosne dil todne ka faisla kiya tha

kaha mere dost ne, tu kyun mujhe tha chhod gaya
tere bin tera dost dekh kitna akela hai reh gaya
baahon mein bhara maine oose, aur gale se laga liya
jo bhi tha mel dil mein ashqon mein tha beh gaya

woh aaj bhi magar oos ladki se pyaar karta hai
har pal uski baatein mujhse hazaar karta hai
main sunta hoon uski saari , baatein aur usko hansata hoon
is tarah mein bhula kar khud ko uske gham mein muskuraata hoon


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2009, 12:00:59 PM »

Saahil Bhai, main kya hee kahun yaar! mindblowing, amazing, mastermind work, brilliant piece, wonderful, original, truthful... sub sub sub! yaar bahot bahot bahot bahot ahchche! dil k sub rang dihk rahe hain! behud khobsurat hai, MA....

ye sachi kahaani hai, tho a salute to you yaar! bahot kum logon me itnee taqat hoti hai, k dil me aansu aur honto pe hassi... Salute you brother!


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2009, 12:08:47 PM »

bahut umda likha h aapne salil ji.....jis tarah se aapne ek kahani ko poem ka rup diya h.....vastav me hi kabil-e-taarif h.

do parts jab maine padhe to mai soch rhi thi ...na jane teesre part me kya hoga.
lkn aapne 3rd part behad acha likha h....pyar na mil ska to kya hua..pyar se b pyari dosti to mil gyi....aaj ki duniya me to pyar ki vjah se doston k beech hi drar aa jati h....

bahut khoob.


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2009, 12:11:01 PM »

Salil Bhai.. Dil Ko Chhoo Jane wali Rachna hai dost.. Yeh Kahani apne aap me kitna dard Samete hai...!!

Taareef Ke Liye mere paas Lafz Kam Padh gaye hain.. Bas itna hi kahunga ki... Superb Work... Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2009, 12:38:38 PM »

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on June 03, 2009, 12:00:59 PM

thanks gudiyaa....... ya this is a true story of ma life.......thnks for liking it........


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2009, 12:39:54 PM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 03, 2009, 12:08:47 PM

thanks pooja dear........haan aapka kehna sahi hai pyaar nahinmila toh kya hua dost toh mila ......aur dosti se keemti cheez kucch bhi nahin hai mei nazar mein.........


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #11 on: June 03, 2009, 12:41:15 PM »

Quote from: Mann on June 03, 2009, 12:11:01 PM

**~** Mann **~**

shukrya vicky bhai.....aap hamesha is tarah daad dete hai hausla dugna ho jaata hai.thanks bhai .is shayari kii gehraai aur dard ko samajhne k liye


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2009, 12:42:51 PM »

doston mere khayal se is kahaani k pahle dono part dhang se likh nahin paaya main,,,,,jisse se aap logon ko padne mein achcha nahin laga .........maafi chahoonga uske liye aage se koshish karoonga kii aapki ummeedon par khara ootaro


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2009, 12:43:21 PM »

Bohot bohot Khoob Saahil Dil main utar gayi aapki ye zindagi ki kahani.....bas lafz nahin hain taareef ke liye ....Excellent creation !


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Re: Dosti aure mohabbat kii ek kahaani~~~ Saahil

«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2009, 01:20:21 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on June 03, 2009, 12:42:51 PM

thats not rtue yaar, i thot it was lovely


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