-----/// Dulhan ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on December 27, 2012, 12:31:40 AM
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main  naa   kehtaa  thaa  ki  laal  rang  bahut  khiltaa  hai tumpe
main  naa kehtaa thaa ki  bahut khoob lagogi tum dulhan banke
dekho khud   ko  aaine   me,  kitni  khoobsurat  lag  rahi ho tum
tumhaare maathe kaa sinduur, kitnaa  khil  rahaa   hai  dekho to

~~~DULHAN~~~

barso     se      khwaaish     thi    ki  tumhe  laal  jodaa  pehnaaun   main
maang    me    bharun    sinduur   ,    aur   apni   dulhan  banaaun  main

loon   saat   fere   tumhaare   sangh  ,   apne  ghar   tumhe  laaun  main
ho    maathe   pe    laal   bindi  ,    tumhe  laal   kangan  pehnaaun  main

bilkul    waisi    lag   rahi    ho     jaisa    main  dekhnaa   chaahtaa  thaa
par   afsos  ,   itnaa    duur    hoon    tumse ,  ab  kaise  paas aaun main

jodaa  laal  hai ,  waisa  hi   shringaar    kiyaa   hai   tumne   aaj ,  magar
tum   meri   nahi   ho ,   ye   sach   khud  ko   aaj  kaise samjhaaun main

maang  tumhaari  bhari  hui  hai , magar sindoor mere naam kaa nahi hai
kisi  aur  kaa   hote   huye   dekh  tumhe  bhalaa  kaise  reh  paaun main

bahut  himmat  hai  jo  dekh   rahaa   hoon  apna  sansaar  lut_te  huye
magar   tumhi   kaho ,  ise  lutne   se   aaj  bhalaa  kaise  bachaaun main

tumne aakhri mulaaquaat me khush rehne kaa waadaa liyaa thaa mujhse
tum  hi  kaho, tumhe  kho  ke hothon pe muskaan kahaan se laaun main

honge  log  bahut   jo  dil  pe  paththar  rakh   ke   khush  reh  lete hain
jisse  judi   hain   saanse , us   se   duur jaa ke bhalaa kaise ji paaun main

doli  uthegi  tumhaari  bas  kuch  hi  der me  yahaan se yeh maaloom hai
aankhon  ke saamne  tum duur jaao usse pehle  kyun na mar jaaun main


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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2012, 12:44:15 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2012, 12:54:10 AM »
Bhut hi acha likha Hirday ji..........
Padhkar DiL KHUSh ho gaya..
Keep writing!!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2012, 06:51:00 AM »
nice post. congratulation
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2012, 07:20:59 AM »
wah wah wah bohut khoob hriday jee daad qubool karen
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2012, 09:49:22 AM »
beautiful kapil ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2012, 10:18:08 AM »
bahut khoob hriday ji
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2012, 10:38:27 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob hriday jee so touching and very nice feelings
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 11:44:38 AM »
Ye jo hai dard aap ka kyu mera dard lagta hai,
Aap ki zuba se dard kyu mera kehta hai.....


Very nice, superb....
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 12:28:59 PM »
main  naa   kehtaa  thaa  ki  laal  rang  bahut  khiltaa  hai tumpe
main  naa kehtaa thaa ki  bahut khoob lagogi tum dulhan banke
dekho khud   ko  aaine   me,  kitni  khoobsurat  lag  rahi ho tum
tumhaare maathe kaa sinduur, kitnaa  khil  rahaa   hai  dekho to

~~~DULHAN~~~

barso     se      khwaaish     thi    ki  tumhe  laal  jodaa  pehnaaun   main
maang    me    bharun    sinduur   ,    aur   apni   dulhan  banaaun  main

loon   saat   fere   tumhaare   sangh  ,   apne  ghar   tumhe  laaun  main
ho    maathe   pe    laal   bindi  ,    tumhe  laal   kangan  pehnaaun  main

bilkul    waisi    lag   rahi    ho     jaisa    main  dekhnaa   chaahtaa  thaa
par   afsos  ,   itnaa    duur    hoon    tumse ,  ab  kaise  paas aaun main

jodaa  laal  hai ,  waisa  hi   shringaar    kiyaa   hai   tumne   aaj ,  magar
tum   meri   nahi   ho ,   ye   sach   khud  ko   aaj  kaise samjhaaun main

maang  tumhaari  bhari  hui  hai , magar sindoor mere naam kaa nahi hai
kisi  aur  kaa   hote   huye   dekh  tumhe  bhalaa  kaise  reh  paaun main

bahut  himmat  hai  jo  dekh   rahaa   hoon  apna  sansaar  lut_te  huye
magar   tumhi   kaho ,  ise  lutne   se   aaj  bhalaa  kaise  bachaaun main

tumne aakhri mulaaquaat me khush rehne kaa waadaa liyaa thaa mujhse
tum  hi  kaho, tumhe  kho  ke hothon pe muskaan kahaan se laaun main

honge  log  bahut   jo  dil  pe  paththar  rakh   ke   khush  reh  lete hain
jisse  judi   hain   saanse , us   se   duur jaa ke bhalaa kaise ji paaun main

doli  uthegi  tumhaari  bas  kuch  hi  der me  yahaan se yeh maaloom hai
aankhon  ke saamne  tum duur jaao usse pehle  kyun na mar jaaun main


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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2012, 12:58:07 PM »
acha hai hridhay ji bohut umda
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2012, 11:54:46 PM »
aapne toh muskaan dete dete rula diya.....padhne ki shuruaat ki toh khushi mehsoos huyi par jab aage badhe to jaana k waqt ne apna khel khel diya aur ek hi pal mein sab bdal gya, har khwaab toot gya, har ummid bebas ho gayi....bahut hi khoob....daad kabul karein
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«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2012, 12:00:59 AM »
Sach me laajavaab
itna sundar chitran..words nahee taaref ke.
dil ki baat kaheen lab pe na aa jaaye
bas..ghungat me hi rahe to accha
Brilliant..outstanding..mindblowing creation
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2012, 07:43:58 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Pritam ji....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2012, 03:05:45 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Pawan ji....!!!

Bhut hi acha likha Hirday ji..........
Padhkar DiL KHUSh ho gaya..
Keep writing!!!

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