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by HumTum on September 11, 2005, 04:46:29 AM
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Adaab DostooN ... chend jazbaat ...


haadsa dekha yeh pichli raat mein
chand ghul kar bah gaya barsat mein

qaid kar paaye na ham hi chandni
kyun kami dhundha kiye zulmat mein

dil mera bin baat jaata hai bikhar
yun kami kuch bhi nahin haalat mein

raah-e-ulfat mein hasin gulshan bhi the
kyaa hua, chhaale mile ifraat mein

raah ki dushwaariyaan mat puuchhiye
aaiye, kuch duur chaliye saath mein

ab na koi phuul hamko diijiye
bojh hota hai bahut saugaat mein

muskura dete hain unko dekh kar
bas yahi kuch hai meri auqaat mein

har Khushi ka daam ashqon se diya
kuch nahin manga kabhi Khairaat mein

jaane kya ahl-e-Khirad ko ho gaya
dhundhtey hain Khamiyan har baat mein

dekh kar insaan ko lagta nahin
kuch farishtey bhi hue is zaat mein

falsafey duniya pe haavi ho gaye
aa gayi lekin kami jazbaat mein !!!

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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2005, 07:58:52 PM »
nice nice..jitna samajh me aya woh acha hai janab!!  :D
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2005, 08:07:48 PM »
sahi kaha Meena sis ne....jitna samajh mein aaya otna bahut hi acha hai...baaki  Puzzled !
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2005, 10:16:04 PM »
wah humtum,bohat khoob likha hai Usual Smile .(Ahl-e-khirad samajh nahi aaya bas).
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2005, 12:47:51 PM »
wah nice one humtum janab sab ki thara hume bhi kuch kuch he samaj mein aaya but jitna samajh liye utna badiya likha hai apne Usual Smile
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2005, 09:56:26 PM »
cccccc mai akheli nahin jisko apki poems chinese lagti hai humtum jiiiiiiiii  :evil:
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2005, 05:46:41 PM »
hummmmm  Meena -JII , Choti Puzzled !  n Salma ..... kuch sheeko Nidhi se ......  ussey bas ik hi word samjh nhi aaya .. waseey Nidhi  Ahl-e-Khirad ka matlab yha ..... mehboob ki achi nature hai !!! aur haan please Nidhi in sab ko kuch sheekha do !!!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2005, 08:55:42 PM »
Wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob HumTum Ji....bahoot hi acha likha hai....
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