*~*Eersha-Dhwesh*~*

by Roja on March 17, 2009, 02:35:15 AM
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Roja
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Eersha-dhwesh mitane wala koyi nahi
Sach ko gale lagane wala koyi nahi

Jalthi per sab tel chidakne wale hai
Lekin aag bhujane wala koyi nahi

Uljhi gupthi aur ulajthi jaati hai
Gupti ko suljane wala koyi nahi

Baatein jitni chaho jisse banva lo
Bigadi baat manane wala koyi nahi

Jo mehfil ki raunak they ve chale gaye
Ab yeh bajm sajane wala koyi nahi

Jo milta hai buri baat hi kehta hai
Acchi baat batane wala koyi nahi

Jo aata hai aur rulakar jaata hai
Dil ko dheer bandne wala koyi nahi

Samaj sakenge raj ko kaise hum, "Roja"
Aas-pass samjane wala koyi nahi..
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2009, 05:10:41 AM »
Bohat bohat khoob Roja.........Kya baat hain aaj back to back 2 kalam padhe tumhare dono zabardast, nashte me kya le rahi ho.....
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2009, 05:54:40 AM »
Very very nice Roja!
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salma786
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2009, 05:57:25 AM »

Eersha-dhwesh mitane wala koyi nahi
Sach ko gale lagane wala koyi nahi

Jalti per sab tel chidakne wale hai
Lekin aag bujhane wala koyi nahi

Uljhi gutthi aur ulajthi jaati hai
Gutthi ko suljhane wala koyi nahi

Baatein jitni chaho jisse banva lo
Bigadi baat manane wala koyi nahi

Jo mehfil ki raunak they ve chale gaye
Ab yeh bajm sajane wala koyi nahi

Jo milta hai buri baat hi kehta hai
Acchi baat batane wala koyi nahi

Jo aata hai aur rulakar jaata hai
Dil ko dheer bandhne wala koyi nahi

Samaj sakenge raaz ko kaise hum, "Roja"
Aas-pass samjane wala koyi nahi..

Bahoot ache Roja dear Applause Applause

Eersha to manushya ke antar me samaya hai,
Swacha man se hi manushya ise mita paya hai,

Sacchai ko jivan ka prateek banaya jisne,
Kathin dagar pe wo sar uthakar chal paya hai,

Bigdi baat ko sudharne ka sahas man me ho jiske,
Wo hi kalyug me bhakti ka swaroop ban paya hai,

Ucha udne ka manabal ho jis Insaan me,
Wo hi kathinayion me aage badta chala jaega,

Jab tak kisi or pe manushya nirbhar hota jayega,
Tab tak jivan ke har mod par wo thokar hi payega,

Eersha jab sare manushya ke antar man se jayega,
Tabhi har yug me manushya prem ka itihaas dohrayega!




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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2009, 02:40:03 PM »
Bohat bohat khoob Roja.........Kya baat hain aaj back to back 2 kalam padhe tumhare dono zabardast, nashte me kya le rahi ho.....

Bahut bahut shukriya Sajid ji. Thanks for yr kind apprecation. (naste mein veg li janab tongue3 )
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2009, 02:40:44 PM »
Very very nice Roja!

Thanks Sophi dear
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2009, 02:42:00 PM »
Bahoot ache Roja dear Applause Applause

Eersha to manushya ke antar me samaya hai,
Swacha man se hi manushya ise mita paya hai,

Sacchai ko jivan ka prateek banaya jisne,
Kathin dagar pe wo sar uthakar chal paya hai,

Bigdi baat ko sudharne ka sahas man me ho jiske,
Wo hi kalyug me bhakti ka swaroop ban paya hai,

Ucha udne ka manabal ho jis Insaan me,
Wo hi kathinayion me aage badta chala jaega,

Jab tak kisi or pe manushya nirbhar hota jayega,
Tab tak jivan ke har mod par wo thokar hi payega,

Eersha jab sare manushya ke antar man se jayega,
Tabhi har yug me manushya prem ka itihaas dohrayega!



wow Lovely dear Salma  Thumbs UP
Thanks for reading me dear.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2009, 03:43:33 AM »
Bahoot ache Roja dear Applause Applause

Eersha to manushya ke antar me samaya hai,
Swacha man se hi manushya ise mita paya hai,

Sacchai ko jivan ka prateek banaya jisne,
Kathin dagar pe wo sar uthakar chal paya hai,

Bigdi baat ko sudharne ka sahas man me ho jiske,
Wo hi kalyug me bhakti ka swaroop ban paya hai,

Ucha udne ka manabal ho jis Insaan me,
Wo hi kathinayion me aage badta chala jaega,

Jab tak kisi or pe manushya nirbhar hota jayega,
Tab tak jivan ke har mod par wo thokar hi payega,

Eersha jab sare manushya ke antar man se jayega,
Tabhi har yug me manushya prem ka itihaas dohrayega!



Bohat Khoob Salma, tumhari hindi to gazab ki hain kabhi kabhaar mujhe bhi tution de do plz...Bohat achcha likha hain tumne.
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salma786
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2009, 10:59:03 AM »

wow Lovely dear Salma  Thumbs UP
Thanks for reading me dear.


Its completely my pleasure dear Usual Smile
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salma786
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«Reply #9 on: March 30, 2009, 11:01:09 AM »
Bohat Khoob Salma, tumhari hindi to gazab ki hain kabhi kabhaar mujhe bhi tution de do plz...Bohat achcha likha hain tumne.

Shukriya Sajid ji notworthy
Hmm... zarur sikhaungi Thumbs UP par apko urdu sikhani hogi Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2009, 03:40:52 PM »
Wonderfuly written roja..

and truth expressed very well...

God Bless You!!!
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: March 30, 2009, 03:58:26 PM »
Wonderfuly written roja..

and truth expressed very well...

God Bless You!!!


Thanks for yr valuable comments dear hasina
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