Ehsaan-o-wafa

by Ravi_Dave on October 07, 2007, 09:08:26 PM
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Ehsaan-o-wafa bematlab duniya mein nahi hain,
Khast-e-dard-o-ghum ka liyaaz meri adaa mein nahi hain,

Tir-e-nazar se zakhmi hona kismat sa hogaya,
Tere diye dard ka koi masiha nahi hain,

Jo nasha chada hain teri jhalak paake,
Woh khumaar kisi chalak bhur minaa mein nahi hain,

Bakshdi zindagaani zaraa-zaraa maar ke,
Aisi dildaari khuda mein nahi hain,

Mausam-e-bahaar mein teri chamak nahi 'Ravi',
Par teri chamak si chamak, kisi aur ki wafa mein nahi hain.
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2007, 04:23:30 AM »
ravi bohat khub app likha karo bohat khubsurat hai ...
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2007, 07:41:42 AM »
Good Posting Ravi_Dave ji..

Agar tamanna hai phoolon se pyar karne ki
Aap kanton se bhi dhaman bacha nahi sakte

Zindagi se bhale hi kitni bhi kar lo dosti
Magar kabhi dard se mukh mod nahi sakte

Roja
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2007, 10:00:55 AM »
Quote from: "Ravi_Dave"
Ehsaan-o-wafa bematlab duniya mein nahi hain,
Khast-e-dard-o-ghum ka liyaaz meri adaa mein nahi hain,

Tir-e-nazar se zakhmi hona kismat sa hogaya,
Tere diye dard ka koi masiha nahi hain,

Jo nasha chada hain teri jhalak paake,
Woh khumaar kisi chalak bhur minaa mein nahi hain,

Bakshdi zindagaani zaraa-zaraa maar ke,
Aisi dildaari khuda mein nahi hain,

Mausam-e-bahaar mein teri chamak nahi 'Ravi',
Par teri chamak si chamak, kisi aur ki wafa mein nahi hain.


Aafreen Ravi.....
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2007, 04:29:24 PM »
Too Good Ravi... Really Very beautifully written....

Very nice Addition Roja...
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2007, 05:50:15 PM »
Shukhriya FaiizJi, RojaJi, PaaniJi, ShikhaJi!

Bohat Acche RojaJi!
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2007, 05:52:37 PM »
Very beautiful creation Ravi.............and a nice one Roja.
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