~<~ Ek Aur Ek Aur ~>~

by Just_Hate_Love on December 02, 2005, 09:02:11 PM
Pages: [1]
Print
Author  (Read 939 times)
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
Mehfil saji thi jaam ka tha daur,
Jaam mein kya tha ye kisne kiya tha gaur,
Jaam mein tha lahu mere armaano ka,
Aur sab keh rahe the ek aur ek aur ......
Logged
Silence
Guest
«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2005, 10:07:57 PM »
wonderful!!!!!

tumne apne arman ki lashon ko sharab me hai gulaya,
humne unki tareef me ek ek sher hai banaya,
wohi jam piye jate hai, wohi sher pade jate hai,
wah wah karke log pochte hai ke "Silence" tu kuch aur nahin laya?  :wink:
Logged
Aryaan
Guest
«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2005, 01:42:21 AM »
Good Ones JHL & Silence....
Logged
tanhachand
Guest
«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2005, 04:07:50 AM »
aahhhhh!
Logged
waheed_rose2004
Guest
«Reply #4 on: December 07, 2005, 09:39:06 PM »
very nice  JHL.......Silence........
Logged
Delicate_Doll
Guest
«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2005, 07:44:03 PM »
gr8 jhl....n silence.......!!!
Logged
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2005, 08:09:43 PM »
Thanks everyone for appreciation ...
Logged
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
t
«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2005, 08:14:39 PM »
Quote from: "Silence"
wonderful!!!!!

tumne apne arman ki lashon ko sharab me hai gulaya,
humne unki tareef me ek ek sher hai banaya,
wohi jam piye jate hai, wohi sher pade jate hai,
wah wah karke log pochte hai ke "Silence" tu kuch aur nahin laya?  :wink:


Good one Silence ...


Tumhe un logo ko jawaab dena na aaya,
Tumne apne sher mein apne pyaar ko hai chhupaya,
Agar log mujhe puchhte to main kehta ki,
Main apne saath hoon tanhaai ko laya ...
Logged
isha_verma7
Guest
«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2005, 11:37:05 AM »
wah wah kya baat hai JHL and SILENCE.......good work u both.......keep on writing!!!!!
Logged
Just_Hate_Love
Guest
«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2005, 01:14:19 PM »
Thanks a lot Isha ...
This i have wrote for you ... Hope you like it ...


Mana ye waqt hame yaad kane ka nahi,
Par bewaqt hi yaad kar liya karo,
Mana ki aapke paas sari duniya hai,
Par kabhi hamara bhi ehsaas kar liya karo ...
Logged
Pages: [1]
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
May 26, 2026, 10:04:42 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.108 seconds with 22 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8523 Real Poets and poetry admirer