Ek Baar______________Baadal

by baadal102 on March 23, 2010, 06:58:03 AM
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Ahsas jindgi ka ab mai karna chahta hu ek baar,
Rub-ru uska didaar mai karna chahta hu ek baar,

Dekh ke unki wo reshmi lehrati julfo ko,
Atit apna yaad mai karna chahta hu ek baar,

Gehrai se dekh ke unki wo gehri masoom aankhe,
Ujale ka ahsaas mai karna chahta hu ek baar,

Chu ke unke us phool se chehre ko haatho se,
Aksh unka ruh mai utarna chahta hu ek baar,

Sunke unki khankhanti churio ki wo awaaz,
RAB ke har DAR ka ahsaas mai karna chahta hu ek baar,

Surkh Jode mai dekh ke apne meharbaa ko,
Zinda hone ka ahsaas mai karna chahta hu ek baar,

Jayada nahi maang raha mai E-KHUDA tujh se,
Inayat kar do apni nazren karam mujh pe ek baar,

Do pal ka baksh do ye lamha BAADAL ke jiwan mai,
Fir sirf mai tera ho jaunga E-KHUDA aab ki baar,

Fir sirf mai tera ho jaunga E-KHUDA aab ki baar.......




Baadal
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2010, 08:38:17 AM »
Wah wah Baadal ji,itne dino baad aa kar kamaal kar gaya aapne.marvelous creation.keep it up Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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riyaz106
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2010, 10:51:58 AM »
Wah wah Baadal aapki poem bahut achhi lagi. Bahut khoobsurat aur purkashish. Yun hi likhte rahiye.
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2010, 12:44:54 PM »
Bohot hi pyara likha hai aapne Baadal Ji, bohot khoob !
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2010, 01:08:14 PM »
Waah Waah Waah.. Bahoot Dino baad kuch likha hai .. aur kya kamaal ka likha hai.. bahoot bahoot Khoob Baadal !
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2010, 01:10:01 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB BAADAL JI. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2010, 06:59:05 PM »
Behtareen peshkash Baadal ji.... bahut khoob likha hai... lajawaab... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2010, 09:16:28 AM »
mai aap sabhi ka tahe dil se
sukergujaar hu jo aap ne mujhe
padha or saraha bhi, sukria aap
sabhi ka bahut bahut sukria




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