EK DIN MAR GAYA--- Saahil

by salil2002 on May 02, 2010, 06:28:38 PM
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Doston yeh poem main kaayi dinon se likhna chahta tha ,,,,jab kissii kii baaton ne mujhe rulaaya tha toh oos waqt yeh nazm ek kehkaha ban k dil main gungunaya tha,,,,wahi aap sabke saath share kar raha hoon


berang si zindgi ho gayi uske jaane k baad
sochta hoon kabhi woh lamha mohabbat ka kidhar gaya

jise dekh kar savera karti thi meri aankhen
woh tabassum sa chehra kyun itna badal gaya

aaj sab rishte naaton ko toda maine , aur jaane laga
toh mere dost ne poochha ki kya kahoon jab koi poochhe tu kidhar gaya

maine kaha kii keh dena main ab tanhaayi main zinda hoon
mere hisse kii mehfil ka daur dhal gaya

mein ek tooti kalam se nikla hua alfaaz tha
jo ashar bante bante bigad gaya

aur kuch na samjhe toh keh dena main "SAAHIL"tha
jo samandaro se ladte ladte ek din mar gaya

aur jab uske khare aansu oon seepiyon se behne lage
toh poochhna oosse kyun mujhe yaad kar k woh bikhar gaya

main toh tanha tha ek ummra bhar uske saath kii khatir
unke intzaar main "SAAHIL" oosi dar pe Gujar gaya

..............Saahil ek din mar gaya
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2010, 06:51:22 PM »
wah sahil .. kya kahene behad qoob ,, maza agaya dad qubool karen ..allah apko khush rake..


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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2010, 08:39:01 PM »
good one sahil sahab Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2010, 11:07:21 PM »
Good one !!!!!!!!!

Vry nyc !!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2010, 11:38:14 PM »
Wah wah Saahil ji,bahut dard bhari nazm pesh kiya aapne.bahut gaherayi aur khoobsurti se likha.excellent work.keep writting. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2010, 03:39:29 AM »
Kya baat hai Saahil Bahoot Bahoot Umda .. Lajawaab !
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«Reply #6 on: May 03, 2010, 06:37:08 AM »
Behad Dard Bhare Ehasaas Yahan Pesh kiye Hain Saahil Bhai.. Aapke Lafzon Ne to Waqai Udaas Kar diya.. Behad Khubsoorat aur Jazzbaaton se Saji Nazm hai aapki.. Lajawab Peshkash.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #7 on: May 03, 2010, 08:45:41 AM »
bahut khoob saahil ji. bahut achhi peshkash likhi hai,
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2010, 04:59:03 PM »
AUR KUCH NA SAMJHE TO KAH DENA SAAHIL THA......WAAH WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB SAAHIL SAHAB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2010, 08:10:29 PM »
Nice one Bhaijan!
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«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2010, 12:22:50 PM »
bahut khub sahil ji...

dil sey likhey yeh dard bhari dasttan bahut achi lagi...
padh te padh tey humin bhi apni dasttan yaad aayi...

 
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2010, 09:12:17 AM »
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 02, 2010, 06:51:22 PM
wah sahil .. kya kahene behad qoob ,, maza agaya dad qubool karen ..allah apko khush rake..


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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on May 02, 2010, 08:39:01 PM
good one sahil sahab Applause Applause Applause
Qadeer bhai aur marhoom bhai aap dono ka bahut bahut shukriya kii aapne pasand kara yoon toh hum aapke saamne kucch bhi nahin phir bhi aapne taareef kii uska bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2010, 09:43:35 PM »
Bahut khoob Saahil Ji
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2010, 11:35:09 PM »
Quote from: neelgold on May 02, 2010, 11:07:21 PM
Good one !!!!!!!!!

Vry nyc !!!!!!
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 02, 2010, 11:38:14 PM
Wah wah Saahil ji,bahut dard bhari nazm pesh kiya aapne.bahut gaherayi aur khoobsurti se likha.excellent work.keep writting. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
neel dear air laila dear thanks a lot kii aaap dono ne pada aur pasand kiya
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«Reply #14 on: March 12, 2012, 10:12:19 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on May 02, 2010, 06:28:38 PM
Doston yeh poem main kaayi dinon se likhna chahta tha ,,,,jab kissii kii baaton ne mujhe rulaaya tha toh oos waqt yeh nazm ek kehkaha ban k dil main gungunaya tha,,,,wahi aap sabke saath share kar raha hoon


berang si zindgi ho gayi uske jaane k baad
sochta hoon kabhi woh lamha mohabbat ka kidhar gaya

jise dekh kar savera karti thi meri aankhen
woh tabassum sa chehra kyun itna badal gaya

aaj sab rishte naaton ko toda maine , aur jaane laga
toh mere dost ne poochha ki kya kahoon jab koi poochhe tu kidhar gaya

maine kaha kii keh dena main ab tanhaayi main zinda hoon
mere hisse kii mehfil ka daur dhal gaya

mein ek tooti kalam se nikla hua alfaaz tha
jo ashar bante bante bigad gaya

aur kuch na samjhe toh keh dena main "SAAHIL"tha
jo samandaro se ladte ladte ek din mar gaya

aur jab uske khare aansu oon seepiyon se behne lage
toh poochhna oosse kyun mujhe yaad kar k woh bikhar gaya

main toh tanha tha ek ummra bhar uske saath kii khatir
unke intzaar main "SAAHIL" oosi dar pe Gujar gaya

..............Saahil ek din mar gaya


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