Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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doston bahut baar maine yahan aisi poems likhi hai jinme maine doosron ka dard bayaan kiya hai .........aaj aapka dost saahil bada pareshaan hai kya kare aapka dost aaj akela pad gaya hai....apne dost ko yaad kar raha hoon aur uske liye kucch likh raha hoon

aaj jaam toh hai magar koi saath nahin
aaj saaki k hone ka bhi ehsaas nahin

jaam oothata toh hoon magar labon se takraun kaise
jaam se jaam takraane ko koi saath nahin

aaj gham dil ka kisse baatun main
aaj mere dard ka kucch ilaaj nahin

bin tere bhi bahut pi chuka hoon dost
magar aaj behka de mujhe is Maye main woh taab nahin

dekha maine tujhko aaj lipta hua kafan se
aaj tere hothon par woh muskaata saaz nahin

tujhe kayi baar di awaaz maine tu phir bhi na ootha
shayad tujh tak pahunchi meri awaaz nahin

teri kami jo reh gayi hai mere jeevan main
ooski gehraai kii ab koi naap nahin

tujhe chheena hai khuda ne mujhse
magar mein oose bata kya kahoon

tu hi toh kaha karta tha "Abhay", "Saahil"
khuda kii marzi par kissii ka raaz nahin

sukoon dena mere dost ko woh jahan bhi rahein
yeh zid hai meri rab se fariyaad nahin


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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2009, 06:33:19 AM »

Bahut Dard Hai Salil Bhai aapki Is rachna Me.. Lagta Hai aapka Dost aapke Dil Ke Bahut Qareeb Tha..!! Aapki Yeh Nazm Waqai aapke Dard Ko Darsha rahi Hai.. Bahut Hi Khoob Likha hai dost..!! Zindgi Me ek dost Ki Kami Ke gam Ko Bakhooobi Is Rachna Me Pesh Kiya hai..!!

Is Rachna Ke liye aaapko Tahe dil se daad Aur Mera Salaam...!!

**~** Mann **~**


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madhuwesh

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2009, 06:49:17 AM »

Aankh bhar aayee Saahil aapke poem padd kar,bahoot khoob. Clapping Smiley


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Rajbir

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2009, 07:36:30 AM »

Salil

No words to express your feelings towards your friend !

May the soul of your friend always rest in peace !


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2009, 07:54:07 AM »

Bahut sundar rachna aap ne likha hai dost ke yaad mein Saahil Ji


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Roja

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2009, 08:54:14 AM »

Salil bahut accha likha hai aapne.
Padkar dil ber aaya dear. good work.


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HIDDENSHAYARI

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2009, 09:05:40 AM »

Salil very nice. I can understand your pain. I to have lost a close friend. May the soul of your friend rest in peace.


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Talat

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2009, 12:50:05 PM »

Salil...Aap ke dost ke ghum ko koi lafz door nahin kar sakta.....Uparwala aapke dost ki aatma ko shanti de. Himmat se kaam lena.


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salil2002

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: July 02, 2009, 12:20:39 PM »

Quote from: Mann on July 01, 2009, 06:33:19 AM

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 01, 2009, 06:49:17 AM

Aankh bhar aayee Saahil aapke poem padd kar,bahoot khoob. Clapping Smiley

Quote from: Rajbir on July 01, 2009, 07:36:30 AM

Salil

No words to express your feelings towards your friend !

May the soul of your friend always rest in peace !

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 01, 2009, 07:54:07 AM

Bahut sundar rachna aap ne likha hai dost ke yaad mein Saahil Ji

Quote from: Roja on July 01, 2009, 08:54:14 AM

Salil bahut accha likha hai aapne.
Padkar dil ber aaya dear. good work.

Quote from: HIDDENSHAYARI on July 01, 2009, 09:05:40 AM

Salil very nice. I can understand your pain. I to have lost a close friend. May the soul of your friend rest in peace.

Quote from: Celmira on July 01, 2009, 12:50:05 PM

Salil...Aap ke dost ke ghum ko koi lafz door nahin kar sakta.....Uparwala aapke dost ki aatma ko shanti de. Himmat se kaam lena.

rajbir bhai,talat di, vicky bhai, roja dear,hidden shayar,madhu dear aur rajesh bhai aap sabka bahut bahut shukriya


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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: July 02, 2009, 02:10:51 PM »

I dont know what to comment.. but he true feeling shows the real pain in your heart for your friend.. Very well expressed..

May God bless U..


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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #10 on: July 02, 2009, 05:21:42 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Salil Bhai...Hum Jab Bhi Kuch likhte hai unme Se Kayi Poetries Sirf Ek Kalpana Hoti Hai Aur Kayi Poetries Apni Niji Zindagi se Juudi Hoti Hai..Aapki yeh Rachna Padhkar Mann Udaas Hua Hai par yehi Zindagi ki Sachai hai Dost..Bahut Dard Hai iss Nazm Mein..

Bahut Bhaut khoob


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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #11 on: July 02, 2009, 07:17:07 PM »

bahut dil mein dard liye hai aapki rachna
apno ko khone ka ghum ek khalipan de jata hai
jo shabdon se nahi bhar sakta.
Allah unki aatma ko shanti de aor aapko hausla de
is ghum ko sahneka
god bless u
nira


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salil2002

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2009, 07:36:29 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 02, 2009, 02:10:51 PM

I dont know what to comment.. but he true feeling shows the real pain in your heart for your friend.. Very well expressed..

May God bless U..

Quote from: khwaish on July 02, 2009, 05:21:42 PM

Quote from: Nira on July 02, 2009, 07:17:07 PM

sophi, khwahish bhai and nira ji bahut bahut shukriya

yoon toh is dil par sirf meri hi milkiyat hai
par aaj bhi har shaam yeh tujhe yaad karta hai


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DhavalRami

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #13 on: August 12, 2009, 03:18:25 PM »

Saahil saaHeb:

namaste!

aapki peShkaSh umdaah rahee..! aNdaaz-e-bayaaN bahot Khuub hay aapka! yuuNhi bazm ki raunaq afzA'ii karte raheN aage bhee! daad !!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval


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Pooja

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Re: Ek dost tha mera ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #14 on: August 12, 2009, 06:09:41 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on July 01, 2009, 06:20:56 AM

Apki is kavita ko parr kar kaya likhu... kuch saal pahle yah kavita likhi thi... http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/ek-wo-shakas-t15728.0.html

apki kavita ke jawab main bas yahi kavita sahi lagi...

Khush raho... bhagwaan ji apke dost ki atma ko shanti de...


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