ek jawani aur dukh

by soudagar on April 06, 2012, 04:15:16 AM
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Roshni ki dhaar pr rakhi kahani or dukh
Aankh se behta hua khamosh paani or dukh,

Mere kamry main usi tarteeb se rakhe hue Phool,
khat, waade, dilaase, ek jawani or dukh,

 Ek dooje se bichar kr umar bhar rote rhe,
Raat, sehra, khush patte, ek raani or dukh,

Ab mere lafzon main woh pehli si kefiyat nahi,
Daal ab jholi main teri maherbani or dukh,

Raat sehra main kisi ne baansuri ki nok pr,
Rakh di phir roti hui yaaden purani or dukh.....!
                NM
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2012, 04:35:43 AM »
Bhut achchi composition h.
Ese share karne ka sukriya.
Esi trah achchi achchi peskas pes karte rahe.
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2012, 07:07:30 AM »
veryyyy nice....sharing....bahut khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2012, 07:32:23 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on April 06, 2012, 04:15:16 AM
Roshni ki dhaar pr rakhi kahani or dukh
Aankh se behta hua khamosh paani or dukh,

Mere kamry main usi tarteeb se rakhe hue Phool,
khat, waade, dilaase, ek jawani or dukh,

 Ek dooje se bichar kr umar bhar rote rhe,
Raat, sehra, khush patte, ek raani or dukh,

Ab mere lafzon main woh pehli si kefiyat nahi,
Daal ab jholi main teri maherbani or dukh,

Raat sehra main kisi ne baansuri ki nok pr,
Rakh di phir roti hui yaaden purani or dukh.....!
                NM


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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2012, 09:14:54 AM »
 icon_flower icon_flower bahut bahut shukriya aap sabka ...........


 icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut thank u so much khawahish sir ji  notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2012, 01:11:28 PM »
good
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2012, 03:04:46 PM »
thank u saini sir....... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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