****Ek khayal to tha****

by jannatjahan on June 13, 2009, 08:48:11 AM
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Teri kamdili ne hume maar daala
warna jeene ka ek khayal to tha,,

thi majburiyaan ki lab seene pade
warna hothon par ek sawal to tha,

jaate jaate mud kar ek baar usne dekha  tha
mujhse bichadne ka  unhe ek jara malaal to tha

jamaane ki ranginiyon se wo kar lete the dillagi
hamare paas kuch na sahi unka Rumaal to tha,

Aur wo jinse bichade hue barson beet gaye
chalte chalte wo yun hi mil gaye...mere doston ye kamal hi to tha....
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2009, 08:59:22 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Shweta sis.. very Nice!
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2009, 09:17:23 AM »
Waah bahot khoob,behad acha likha hai aapne Jannat ji
Shukriyaa Kaash ji.....
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2009, 09:25:47 AM »
Thanks a lot Dear Sophi......
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2009, 09:42:14 AM »
Teri kamdili ne hume maar daala
warna jeene ka ek khayal to tha,,

thi majburiyaan ki lab seene pade
warna hothon par ek sawal to tha,

jaate jaate mud kar ek baar usne dekha  tha
mujhse bichadne ka  unhe ek jara malaal to tha

jamaane ki ranginiyon se wo kar lete the dillagi
hamare paas kuch na sahi unka Rumaal to tha,

Aur wo jinse bichade hue barson beet gaye
chalte chalte wo yun hi mil gaye...mere doston ye kamal hi to tha....


JJ KYA KAMAAL HAI BAHAUT ACHCHA
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2009, 10:31:59 AM »
Thanks Dear K_A........
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shab
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2009, 11:20:13 AM »
        LAJAWAB JJ
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salil2002
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2009, 12:07:20 PM »
bahuta achche shwetha dear

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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2009, 12:12:51 PM »
VERY NICE AND BEAUTIFUL CREATION .SHWETA JI, Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2009, 04:48:44 PM »
Khubsurat rachna, Jannat Ji
wah wah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2009, 08:21:45 PM »
bohot khoob jannat jahan...!
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2009, 09:23:40 AM »
        LAJAWAB JJ
Thanks Dear Shabana....
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