*Ek Ladki*

by Roja on January 18, 2008, 07:37:21 PM
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Ek ladki pagal si
Ek Ajnabi se dil lagayi

Din raat meeti baathon mein khoyi rehti
Pagal ladki pyar main diwani bani

Ajnabi ka dil me na pyar tha na wafa
Pyar ko khilwaad samajkar dilse khelta raha

Saal guzre ajnabi ka tevar badla
Kehne laga "Tum Meri Kab Thi"

Aag lagi dilme, Sapna tootkar bikra
Rote pilakte ladki poochi, "Mera Kasoor Kya Hai?"

Zalim ajnabi ne fir kaha, "Maine kab tumhe uksaya pyar ke naam se?"
"Mai Tumse Kab Kaha I Love You Jaan"?

Ladki chup ho gayi, toota dil rote huwe socha

Kya apnon ko khokar hum jee nahi rahe?
Kya hai is ladke pe jo jogan bani huyi hai?

"Roja" zindagi ke raah mein
Aise kante roj ugte aur chubte hai

Wo ajnabi tera pyar ka kabil nahi tha.
Ab sambal jaa.
Tum itne main khush ho ja k tumne pyar kiya
Aur pyar karna zurm nahi
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2008, 07:40:52 PM »
Roja bohat acha likha hai dear.. Usual Smile
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Yo...Babby
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2008, 08:01:29 PM »
Bahut Khoob ROJA

bahut achchha likha hai tumne Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2008, 10:56:04 PM »
Good one Roja!!!
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~princess~
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2008, 02:18:06 AM »
sis dis one is too gud really...kuch yaad agayi yeh pad kar

mwaaaahh keep wrting
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thycreator
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2008, 07:24:54 AM »
wah wah Roja.....Gaalib sahab ne kaha tha....

Muhabbat mein nahi hai fark jeene aur marne ka,
Ussi ko dekh kar jeete hain jis kaafir pe dum nikale....

Kitna sach hai ye ek saachi muhabbat ke liye...

Tumhe paa lene ki hasrat iss dil mein hai lekin,
Tere iss dil kya karen jismein koi aur hai basta....Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2008, 08:54:37 AM »
wah wah Roja.....Gaalib sahab ne kaha tha....

Muhabbat mein nahi hai fark jeene aur marne ka,
Ussi ko dekh kar jeete hain jis kaafir pe dum nikale....

Kitna sach hai ye ek saachi muhabbat ke liye...

Tumhe paa lene ki hasrat iss dil mein hai lekin,
Tere iss dil kya karen jismein koi aur hai basta....Usual Smile

bahut umda sharing ki aapne... Thanks ji
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2008, 08:55:20 AM »
Good one Roja!!!

Shukhriya didi, kuch likhte aap b to maza aajata na
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Roja
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2008, 08:56:10 AM »
sis dis one is too gud really...kuch yaad agayi yeh pad kar

mwaaaahh keep wrting

arre behna kuch yaad aaya to kuch likh b dete?
bahut bahut shukhriya roshu
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2008, 01:33:13 PM »
Ek ladki pagal si
Ek Ajnabi se dil lagayi

Din raat meeti baathon mein khoyi rehti
Pagal ladki pyar main diwani bani

Ajnabi ka dil me na pyar tha na wafa
Pyar ko khilwaad samajkar dilse khelta raha

Saal guzre ajnabi ka tevar badla
Kehne laga "Tum Meri Kab Thi"

Aag lagi dilme, Sapna tootkar bikra
Rote pilakte ladki poochi, "Mera Kasoor Kya Hai?"

Zalim ajnabi ne fir kaha, "Maine kab tumhe uksaya pyar ke naam se?"
"Mai Tumse Kab Kaha I Love You Jaan"?

Ladki chup ho gayi, toota dil rote huwe socha

Kya apnon ko khokar hum jee nahi rahe?
Kya hai is ladke pe jo jogan bani huyi hai?

"Roja" zindagi ke raah mein
Aise kante roj ugte aur chubte hai

Wo ajnabi tera pyar ka kabil nahi tha.
Ab sambal jaa.
Tum itne main khush ho ja k tumne pyar kiya
Aur pyar karna zurm nahi


BAUT KHOOB ROJA...BAHUT SACHAI HAI AAPKI IS KAVITA MEIN,MUJHE KHAAS KAR YEH LINE BAHUT PASAND AAYI

 "ROJA" ZINDAGI KE RAAH MEIN
 AISE KAANTE ROJ UGTE AUR CHUPTE HAI...
BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE
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thycreator
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2008, 03:09:58 PM »
wah wah Roja.....Gaalib sahab ne kaha tha....

Muhabbat mein nahi hai fark jeene aur marne ka,
Ussi ko dekh kar jeete hain jis kaafir pe dum nikale....

Kitna sach hai ye ek saachi muhabbat ke liye...

Tumhe paa lene ki hasrat iss dil mein hai lekin,
Tere iss dil kya karen jismein koi aur hai basta....Usual Smile

bahut umda sharing ki aapne... Thanks ji

Thanks to you Roja....

Ghalib sahab ko jitna padho utna kam lagta hai....Usual Smile

Mere likhi do lines bhi ghalib sahab se hi inspired hain, he used to write so much in 2 lines on which one can write a full length poem.
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Sonia01
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2008, 08:59:20 PM »
Ek ladki pagal si
Ek Ajnabi se dil lagayi

Din raat meeti baathon mein khoyi rehti
Pagal ladki pyar main diwani bani

Ajnabi ka dil me na pyar tha na wafa
Pyar ko khilwaad samajkar dilse khelta raha

Saal guzre ajnabi ka tevar badla
Kehne laga "Tum Meri Kab Thi"

Aag lagi dilme, Sapna tootkar bikra
Rote pilakte ladki poochi, "Mera Kasoor Kya Hai?"

Zalim ajnabi ne fir kaha, "Maine kab tumhe uksaya pyar ke naam se?"
"Mai Tumse Kab Kaha I Love You Jaan"?

Ladki chup ho gayi, toota dil rote huwe socha

Kya apnon ko khokar hum jee nahi rahe?
Kya hai is ladke pe jo jogan bani huyi hai?

"Roja" zindagi ke raah mein
Aise kante roj ugte aur chubte hai

Wo ajnabi tera pyar ka kabil nahi tha.
Ab sambal jaa.
Tum itne main khush ho ja k tumne pyar kiya
Aur pyar karna zurm nahi


Superb... (Magar kisne toda aapka dil? sad10)
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Sonia01
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2008, 09:02:07 PM »
Nice sharing Thy creator... (ab aap kahan ho jee?)
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