Ek pal bhi use....

by Just_Hate_Love on January 31, 2005, 12:10:40 AM
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Just_Hate_Love
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Ek pal bhi use hum bhoola na sake,
Umra bhar hum jise yaad aa na sake.

Kis kadar apne ko kho baite hum ?
Aaine me bhi hum khud ko paa na sake.

Aag dil me judai ki jalti rahi,
Par teri yaad ko hum jalaa na sake.

Fark ke naam par fark itna raha,
Hum nibhate rahe aur tum nibha na sake.

Hum ko khamoshiyaan raas aane lagi,
Kehna chaha magar kuchh suna na sake.

Dil lagane ki humko sazaa wo mili,
Ki khabhi khud se hum dil lagana sake...
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2009, 12:26:07 PM »
Very nice and beautiful creation.Just-Hate-Love ji,excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2009, 09:15:37 PM »
...thanks a lot for appreciation...
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2009, 09:20:13 PM »
wah JHL ji... wah wah...

bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai aap ney
ek ek shabd meh bahut gehrayi hai, bahut hi dard meh
likha hai aap ney... bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2009, 09:22:37 PM »
...thanks a lot Jasbir paaji...
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