Ek Pal:Shayri-E-Dard

Pooja

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Ek pal ko paane ki chahat mai
Kaya kaya humne gawaya hai
Dekha bahoot door talak jab ajj
Andhiara hi najar ayya hai

Khwabo ke wo mehal suhane
Khundhar sa najar ayya hai
Meethi meethi baato ke jaadu main
Chupa hua ek khanjar najar ayya hai

Apni hi peeth main wo khanjar
Lahu se sanna najar ayya hai
Apne hi pyar ke hatho dekho
Kitna khud ko bebas paaya hai

Ek pal ko paane ki chahat main........


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harashmahajan

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2008, 09:49:30 PM »

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waah pooja ji ...ek khoobsoorat nazmm ko anjaam diya hai aapnee....daad kabool farmayeiN....

Zindagi tapti hui dupehar si akeli kyuiN hai
Har raat mere saammne bas ik paheli kyuiN hai
Waqt muthi se nikal jata hai balu ki ret ki tarah
Zindagi aaj dard our bebasi ki saheli kyuiN hai

Harash


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Pooja

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2008, 09:58:43 PM »

shukaria Harsh ji!! Bahot hi achi lines likhi hai apne!!!

Zindagi ko samjhna asaan na tha
Khud ke dil ne bhi uljhaya hume
Wo jis per sab qurbaan kiya
Wo hi qurbaan kar ayya hume.................


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harashmahajan

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2008, 10:32:53 PM »

Shukriyaaa pooja.....theek kaha zindagi ko samajhna assan tohnahiN.....

Zinagi ko baddua na de mere humnashieN
Ye toh har simt dard-e-gum se karahti hai
Qurbani ka aalam ab hum kya sunayeiN
ye toh khud-b-khud qurbaan ho jaati hai

Harash


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Aryaan

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2008, 12:30:23 AM »

Bohat khoob Pooja & Harash..


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Pooja

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2008, 12:34:41 AM »

Shukaria Aryaan ji!!


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Talat

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2008, 03:50:15 AM »

Wah ! Pooja..aaj to bohot jadoo chala rahi hain aap....bohot khoob Harash...!


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harashmahajan

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2008, 11:21:16 AM »

Shukriyaah aryan ji our Talat ji.....


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2008, 02:24:03 PM »

bohut hi achha likha hai pooja ji and harsh ji


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Pooja

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #9 on: March 19, 2008, 08:51:15 PM »

Thanks Talat and Bhawna!!

keetabi baatein, kitabo maia choi lagati hai
khayali baatein, khayalo mai achi lagati hai
yah haqiqat kaha laker jaaye Pooja
jahan sirf zakhmo ki nagari basati hai!!!!


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honeyrose

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2008, 12:42:50 AM »

Bohat acha likhe hai pooja ,Harash ji... Usual Smile


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aarzoomehek

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2008, 09:57:36 PM »

Zindagi issi ka naam hai..ik pal khushi to ok pal gham....In dono ehsaason ke saath chalna hi zindagi hai..bohot acha likha hai pooja..bless u.. Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Re: Ek Pal

«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2008, 12:59:41 AM »

bahoot bahoot shukaria Honey and aarzoomehek !!


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