Ek Tanha Baadal...

by Amanush... on January 30, 2005, 07:33:18 PM
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Ek Tanha Baadal...

Ek akela tanha baadal ki tarah
toumhare in khayaalon par se
gouzar kar jaana hai moujhe...

Andhakaar bankar tere suraj par
apni parchaayi ko padne nahin diya
Na hi barsaat ki boundein bankar
teri khoushiyan par barsa kabhi

Suraj ko apni baahon main lipatne wale
Ya pyaasi dharti par barasne wale
baadalon ki hi kouch ahamiyat hoti hai
Baaki ….kisse pata

Kal yahi kaafi hoga mere liye
ki tere asmaan se gouzar kar
tere deedaar ke do pal paaya meine…

Tera naam mere liye hamesha
ek ghazal ban kar rahegi…

Amanush...

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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2005, 05:49:13 AM »
Cool one Amanush......

 
Aankh barsi hain tere naam par saawan ki tarah,
Jism sulgaa hain teri yaad mein indhan ki tarah,
Is bulandi se mujhe tune nawaza kyon tha ,
Gir ke main tut gaya kaanch ke bartan ki tarah.....
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2005, 05:44:45 PM »
wah wah bohot ache!!!!!!!

 :D
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dolly
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2005, 06:06:43 PM »
WOW...GR8888.....Amaanush!!!!

ur name also gud!!

Ek Tanha Chand.....

Amaawas ke jaisi lagti hai yeh raat,
Lagta hai raat bhi dhoondne gayee hai chaand ko aaj..
Poocha to kehne lagi chaand gayaa hai khuda ke paas,
Kehta tha pooch kar hi aaonga kyon nahi hai in lambi kaali raaton mein koi mere saath…          (NM,little modified)
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Amanush...
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2005, 07:49:02 PM »
@Just_Hate_Love ji... Thanks for appreciating ! Aap ki shayri bhi hum
ko bahout achi lagi...

 @Meena ji... Daad ke liye bahout shukriya !

 @Dolly ji... Aap ko "Ek Tanha Baadal"acha laga...hum bahout khoush houe...Aap ke "Ek Tanha Chand bhi kouch kam nahin !

Younhi hawsla dete rahiyega...

Amanush...

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dolly
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2005, 08:09:19 PM »
yea dear Amanushji !!thanx n alwys their.....lekin aap tanha baadal nahin hain....hum sab hain naa aapke saath....saare baadal hi hain yahan...
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Amanush...
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2005, 08:14:57 PM »
Thanks...Dolly ji ! So sweet of you...

A special one for you...

Zindagi ki talaash main
kadam phir uss mor par la diya,
jahan teri sadaaien ke saaye
ke piche piche hum chalte rahe...

Amanush...

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Like it...?
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dolly
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2005, 08:24:01 PM »
wah wah!!!...bahut khoob Amaanushji.. .
so sweet of u also....keep riting...i vud also rite par time lagta hai zyaada aati nahi shaayari.....
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Amanush...
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2005, 08:35:48 PM »
Thanks for liking it... Dolly ji !

Amanush...

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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2005, 03:58:36 AM »
Bohat khoob  Amanush, Just_Hate_Love & Dolly.....

Door Ik Shehar Se Jab Koi Bhatakta Baadal
Meri Jalti Huwi Hasti Ki Taraf Aaye Ga
Kitni Hasrat Se Ussey Dekhein Gi Piyasi Aankhein
Aur Woh WaQt Ki Maanind, Guzar Jaye Ga...
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Amanush...
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«Reply #10 on: February 08, 2005, 10:29:38 PM »
Shukriya...Aryan ji !

Pehle kabhi pyaar se bahout lagan thi
ab kissi ko bhi chahne ki himmat nahin
Meri mohabbat ahista ahista mar rahi hai
aur moujhe youn marne ki chaahat nahin...

Amanush...

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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2005, 04:34:23 PM »
Thank you everyone n also good job by all...
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2005, 09:57:03 PM »
wah!!! bahoot khoob!!!!
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