Ek Tarfa Pyar

by Meena on January 24, 2005, 10:37:49 PM
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«Reply #30 on: January 26, 2005, 10:27:56 PM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "Meena"
Ikrar karne se pehle hi humne udasi ka jam pi liya hai,
Jab jana ke unone kab ka kisi aur ka pyar pa liya hai,
Hum kyu nahin samajhte ke mohabbat mere naseeb me nahin,
Jo aaj phir se rah-e-ishq ko azma liya hai?

Pyar nahin to dosti hi sahi, unka saath hi to chahate hai,
Par kyu unse bar bar mil kar hum yuh gabrate hai,
Chahat ke phool to khilte hai roz hi magar,
Hume une dil me ek raaz ki tara chupate hai!

Si liye hai hoonth, band kar li hai ankhen,
Aise hi aab wafa-e-dosti adat karte hai,
Duaon me mangi unki kushi aur salamti,
Par khud aab roz gut gut kar marte hai!


wow........ bahut ache
yaar aap sab hi bahut acha likhte hain


Kisi ki kishtiyon ko kinara nahin milta,
Kisi ko dhoodne se sahara nahin milta,
logo ki khushiyan bhi apni
Hamaien to gham bhi hamara nahin milta.


thanx u r too gud ! bohot acha likha apne!

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«Reply #31 on: January 26, 2005, 10:28:35 PM »
Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
Ho Chuki Mulakat Abhi Salam Baki hai,
Apke naam ki do Ghut Sarab Baki Hai,
Apko Mubarak Ho Khusiyon ka Samiyana,
Mere Nasib mein abhi do gaz jamin baki hai.(nm)


wahhhh!!!!

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«Reply #32 on: January 26, 2005, 10:35:46 PM »
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thanx creator ji!
niceeeeeeee!!

amar hone ki chaha nahin agar mil jate mohababt kuch ghadiya,
ruswa to hum une karenge nahin kabhi, chahe beet jaye hazaro sadiyan!


Wah Meena ji,

Mohabbat bhi milegi tumko issi jahan mein mere humdum,
Dunia mein aaj bhi wafadar saans lete hai,
Tumhari wafa pe hame kya, khuda ko bhi shaq nahi,
Ye aur bat hai ki hum teri wafa ke hasil nahi.


wah ji wah!!!!

hume koi wafadar mane ya na mane,
iska hume koi gum nahin,
chada sakhe jo rooh ko bhi nasha,
sharab me aisa koi dum nahin!
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«Reply #33 on: January 26, 2005, 10:38:09 PM »
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Quote from: "Meena"
Ikrar karne se pehle hi humne udasi ka jam pi liya hai,
Jab jana ke unone kab ka kisi aur ka pyar pa liya hai,
Hum kyu nahin samajhte ke mohabbat mere naseeb me nahin,
Jo aaj phir se rah-e-ishq ko azma liya hai?

Pyar nahin to dosti hi sahi, unka saath hi to chahate hai,
Par kyu unse bar bar mil kar hum yuh gabrate hai,
Chahat ke phool to khilte hai roz hi magar,
Hume une dil me ek raaz ki tara chupate hai!

Si liye hai hoonth, band kar li hai ankhen,
Aise hi aab wafa-e-dosti adat karte hai,
Duaon me mangi unki kushi aur salamti,
Par khud aab roz gut gut kar marte hai!


wowww...meenaji  you write d best  most original...aur hamesha dil ko choo jaati hai...bhot khub..hum to aapke fan ho gaye....


shukriya ji shukria!
pas fan aap us Khuda ka baniya hum to sir nacheez hai!
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«Reply #34 on: January 26, 2005, 10:39:04 PM »
thank u to everyone who likes my poem!  :D

bohot acha likha creator ji, sandhaya ji and pandit ji! well done!!!!

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«Reply #35 on: January 26, 2005, 10:50:29 PM »
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thank you to everyone who likes my poem!  :D

bohot acha likha creator ji, sandhaya ji and pandit ji! well done!!!!

 :D


ur welcome meenaji... tongue3
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«Reply #36 on: January 26, 2005, 10:52:34 PM »
wah........kya baat hai,excellent everyone.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #37 on: January 26, 2005, 10:53:46 PM »
nidhiiiiiii i missed ur comment ! thanx a lot

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«Reply #38 on: January 26, 2005, 11:01:19 PM »
u r welcome sis......i didnt come 2 this forum so cudnt give u a comment.But my comment lies in every poem of urs.Keep wroting. :D
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«Reply #39 on: January 26, 2005, 11:09:40 PM »
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thanx creator ji!
niceeeeeeee!!

amar hone ki chaha nahin agar mil jate mohababt kuch ghadiya,
ruswa to hum une karenge nahin kabhi, chahe beet jaye hazaro sadiyan!


Wah Meena ji,

Mohabbat bhi milegi tumko issi jahan mein mere humdum,
Dunia mein aaj bhi wafadar saans lete hai,
Tumhari wafa pe hame kya, khuda ko bhi shaq nahi,
Ye aur bat hai ki hum teri wafa ke hasil nahi.


wah ji wah!!!!

hume koi wafadar mane ya na mane,
iska hume koi gum nahin,
chada sakhe jo rooh ko bhi nasha,
sharab me aisa koi dum nahin!


Thanx Meena ji
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«Reply #40 on: January 26, 2005, 11:10:27 PM »
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you r welcome sis......i didnt come 2 this forum so cudnt give you a comment.But my comment lies in every poem of urs.Keep wroting. :D


thanx nidhi ji,..
aaap se sune huye bahut din ho gaye hai,
kuch sunaiyea ki dil ka dard kaafur ho jaye.
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«Reply #41 on: January 26, 2005, 11:10:54 PM »
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thank you to everyone who likes my poem!  :D

bohot acha likha creator ji, sandhaya ji and pandit ji! well done!!!!

 :D


Thanx again Meena ji
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«Reply #42 on: January 26, 2005, 11:14:22 PM »
shukriya dosto!!!

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«Reply #43 on: January 26, 2005, 11:22:01 PM »
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you r welcome sis......i didnt come 2 this forum so cudnt give you a comment.But my comment lies in every poem of urs.Keep wroting. :D


thanx nidhi ji,..
aaap se sune huye bahut din ho gaye hai,
kuch sunaiyea ki dil ka dard kaafur ho jaye.


zaroor pandit,aaj bohat dino baad kuch likha hai maine.
CHANDNI RAAT post karti hoon abhi,hope u wil like it. Winking
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«Reply #44 on: January 26, 2005, 11:30:22 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
you r welcome sis......i didnt come 2 this forum so cudnt give you a comment.But my comment lies in every poem of urs.Keep wroting. :D


thanx nidhi ji,..
aaap se sune huye bahut din ho gaye hai,
kuch sunaiyea ki dil ka dard kaafur ho jaye.


zaroor pandit,aaj bohat dino baad kuch likha hai maine.
CHANDNI RAAT post karti hoon abhi,hope you wil like it. Winking


ur welcome nidhi ji..waiting for that...
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