Ek tarfa muhabbat….sahal

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                       Ek tarfa muhabbat!!.…sahal

Manzil-e-yaar  pe  wo  they khadey rotey huay.
Muskuratey huay  hum to wahan se chaldiye,
Wo they hamari dhun mein khoye huay,
Aur hum apni dhun mein wahan se chaldiye.

Hamari muhabbat mein wo tarastey rahe,
Aankhon se aansoo barastey rahe,
chashma-e-muhabbat se hum to guzar gaye,              
Bekhayali mein hum unki pyaas aur badhaye chaldiye.

Hoslay dil ke badhtey hi ja rahe they,
Wo hamare aur paas aa rahe they,
Khamoshi unki kuch na keh saki ,
isharay bhi hum samjhe na they,wo aatish-e-dil bujhaye chaldiye.

Ek tarfa muhabbat mein yehi haal hota hai,
Haal-e-dil sunana bhi muhaal hota hai,
“Sahal” unki muhabbat samajh na saka tu,
Wo apni muhabbat dil mein chhupaye chaldiye.
(chashma=river)
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2012, 12:21:49 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2012, 12:26:49 PM »
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 Thankyou !  shireen ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2012, 03:00:12 PM »
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Bahut khub bahut khub
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«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2012, 03:02:24 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2012, 03:17:53 PM »
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Waah achchee nazm kahi apne Sahal ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 24, 2012, 03:19:24 PM »
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 Thankyou ! zarra
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2012, 03:51:05 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai sahal ji..... keep it up
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2012, 04:00:52 PM »
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 Thankyou ! vimmi ji  ....means a lot
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2012, 04:30:23 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2012, 04:31:45 PM »
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 Thankyou ! DR SAHAB
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2012, 10:58:55 AM »
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thank Q freinds
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