ek woh..

by sanya310 on June 20, 2005, 03:00:27 PM
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Ek wohi tha jisne chaahat mein apna dil de diya
Mere liye woh saari duniya se bhi lad gaya

wohi tha jiske liye shayad main zinda hoon
Uske aane ki aahat se hi jeevan sawar gaya

Chaaha maine usko shayad chahat se bhi zyada
Hadh se bhi zyada woh bhi mujhe pyar kar gaya

zindagi uske naam kar di thi maine to ekdum se
woh toh mere dil mein apna ghar hi kar gaya

manzil tha wo meri, phir kyun akela chhod gaya woh
Namm aaknhon mein ashkon ke saagar bhar gaya

Hai chhupa is dil mein kahin to, wapas usse aana hai
pata nahi kyun paagal duniya kahe ke woh mar gaya...
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2005, 03:07:28 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
Ek wohi tha jisne chaahat mein apna dil de diya
Mere liye woh saari duniya se bhi lad gaya

wohi tha jiske liye shayad main zinda hoon
Uske aane ki aahat se hi jeevan sawar gaya

Chaaha maine usko shayad chahat se bhi zyada
Hadh se bhi zyada woh bhi mujhe pyar kar gaya

zindagi uske naam kar di thi maine to ekdum se
woh toh mere dil mein apna ghar hi kar gaya

manzil tha wo meri, phir kyun akela chhod gaya woh
Namm aaknhon mein ashkon ke saagar bhar gaya

Hai chhupa is dil mein kahin to, wapas usse aana hai
pata nahi kyun paagal duniya kahe ke woh mar gaya...


wah  wah  sanya.............superbsssss   ..........very  nice  wordings..........maza  aa  gaya.............

Taarik sahi raat magar subha to hogi
Har raat ka hota hai sawera isay kehna

Roshan hain tere dam se hi yeh chand sitaray
Ho jaega jatay hi andhera isay kehna

Tanhai ka zehar main pita hun shab o roz
Ho jaega wo bhi kabhi tanha isay kehna

Kion puchta rehta hai meri khero khabar
Han gham ne tera a ke hai ghera isay kehna

Mil ja tera saath duniya bhi hai jannat
Ab dil hai teray gham ka basera isay kehna..........................nm
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2005, 03:07:44 PM »
wah sanya sis!!!!!!!!!!!!

"manzil tha wo meri, phir kyun akela chhod gaya woh
Namm aaknhon mein ashkon ke saagar bhar gaya

Hai chhupa is dil mein kahin to, wapas usse aana hai
pata nahi kyun paagal duniya kahe ke woh mar gaya... "


yeh lines bohot touchy hai!! keep it up kuddiye!

 :D
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sanya310
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2005, 03:24:46 PM »
thanx MAamu ...thnx a lot meena!!!!!                                                                                                                              ..bohot hi achhe waheed maamu!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2005, 03:27:55 PM »
thanxxxxxxxxxx  alot  mamu  ki  dost................ tongue3
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2005, 03:31:22 PM »
wah sanya,its very very very very nice,and superbbb waheed,bohat acche dost Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2005, 03:37:25 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
Ek wohi tha jisne chaahat mein apna dil de diya
Mere liye woh saari duniya se bhi lad gaya

wohi tha jiske liye shayad main zinda hoon
Uske aane ki aahat se hi jeevan sawar gaya

Chaaha maine usko shayad chahat se bhi zyada
Hadh se bhi zyada woh bhi mujhe pyar kar gaya

zindagi uske naam kar di thi maine to ekdum se
woh toh mere dil mein apna ghar hi kar gaya

manzil tha wo meri, phir kyun akela chhod gaya woh
Namm aaknhon mein ashkon ke saagar bhar gaya

Hai chhupa is dil mein kahin to, wapas usse aana hai
pata nahi kyun paagal duniya kahe ke woh mar gaya...


bahoot hi khoob likha hai sanya ji ...

Bas intizaar hia humko bahar aane ka
ishq mein lamhat-e hizr gujar jaane ka

roz karte hian duaien ho waqt ke hazir
kya mukarr hia bata, lamha ooske aane ka


neend aati nahi aakhon mein is khayal ke sadke
jaane kya pal ho jaag jaane ka


poochte firte hian har shay se ho diwane se
jaane kaun le aaye ek paigam ooske aane ka !!
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sanya310
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2005, 03:38:30 PM »
thanx nidhiiiiiiiiiiiii!!! thnxx humtum!!!!! bohot hi khoob likha hai!!                                                                 ..
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2005, 03:38:43 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
wah sanya,its very very very very nice,and superbbb waheed,bohat acche dost Usual Smile


hmmmmmmmm   thanxxxxxxxxxx    my  sweet  friend,,,,,,,,,... tongue3  tongue3  :D  :D
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2005, 04:20:54 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
Ek wohi tha jisne chaahat mein apna dil de diya
Mere liye woh saari duniya se bhi lad gaya

wohi tha jiske liye shayad main zinda hoon
Uske aane ki aahat se hi jeevan sawar gaya

Chaaha maine usko shayad chahat se bhi zyada
Hadh se bhi zyada woh bhi mujhe pyar kar gaya

zindagi uske naam kar di thi maine to ekdum se
woh toh mere dil mein apna ghar hi kar gaya

manzil tha wo meri, phir kyun akela chhod gaya woh
Namm aaknhon mein ashkon ke saagar bhar gaya

Hai chhupa is dil mein kahin to, wapas usse aana hai
pata nahi kyun paagal duniya kahe ke woh mar gaya...


wahhhh...............very nice......................sanya..........
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2005, 05:42:17 PM »
bahut ache sanya, waheed aur hum tum

hal-e-dil unse kah nahi sakte
kuch bhi shikwa wo sah nahi sakte

derd ko humse uns hai itna    (uns = lagao)
uske bin hum bhi rah nahi sakte

hai khushi udti firti titli si
rangeen par kaid rah nahi sakte

chashm-e-ashk ho gaya hai khushk
derd bhi ho to bah nahi sakte

aapke ghum ka raj hai dil per
dakhl duje ka sah nahi sakte

apni halat to ab hai aisi SAMNOJ
kab chale jaye kah nahi sakte
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2005, 09:05:04 PM »
thanx a lot khushi, sam...bohot achha likha hai sam..                                                                                                              . :D
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«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2005, 12:50:00 AM »
ur  welcome  sam............once  again  wonderfullllllll
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2008, 10:30:23 PM »
wah bahoot khoob Sanya, waheed, HumTum and Samnoj!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2008, 09:40:10 AM »
Ek wohi tha jisne chaahat mein apna dil de diya
Mere liye woh saari duniya se bhi lad gaya

wohi tha jiske liye shayad main zinda hoon
Uske aane ki aahat se hi jeevan sawar gaya

Chaaha maine usko shayad chahat se bhi zyada
Hadh se bhi zyada woh bhi mujhe pyar kar gaya

zindagi uske naam kar di thi maine to ekdum se
woh toh mere dil mein apna ghar hi kar gaya

manzil tha wo meri, phir kyun akela chhod gaya woh
Namm aaknhon mein ashkon ke saagar bhar gaya

Hai chhupa is dil mein kahin to, wapas usse aana hai
pata nahi kyun paagal duniya kahe ke woh mar gaya...


wah bahot achche
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