faasle phir darmayaan na ho... Intezar !

by Intezar on June 27, 2011, 01:07:56 PM
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Jane kaisa ye dard hai jo hontho se bayaa.n na ho
kaheen in lafzo mein tere hi dard ki daastaa.n na ho

Palkein jhuka kar chalte hain hum unki gali se
ke phir unse milkar nigaahein pashemaa.n na ho

samet kar baahon mein unhe gujaar lete hain raat
karwat nahin badalte ke faasle phir darmaya.n na ho

Jalti saanso mein uljhi hain aahein kayi raaton se
magar ye jism jalkar bhi is aag mein dhuaa.n na ho

hum bhi kya nikle is bheegte mausam me tar laute
yun bhi aansuon me kisi ke dil ka aashiyaa.n na ho

wo samajhte hain ke hum juda ho chale hain unse lekin
aisa bi nahi k ab tak unke hotho pe mera nishaa.n na ho

wo aakar saahil par hi hume tabaah kar gaye ‘Intezar’
aur hum sochte the ki mazdhaar me kahin tufaa.n na ho… !


Shukriya
Intezar !






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Manish Kumar Khedawat
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2011, 04:21:32 PM »
bahut khoob intezar zi
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2011, 04:30:42 PM »
Intezar ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2011, 06:22:45 PM »
Manish ji bahut bahut Shukriya aapka...

Intezar !

bahut khoob intezar zi
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2011, 07:05:24 PM »
Haye..
Bata nahin sakta dil ko kitni khushi hui apki kalam dekh kar mere bhai..
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Aur akhri ashaar toh loot le gaya mujhe..
Kya baat hai mere bhai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2011, 12:56:49 AM »
dard ko ess se behtar aur kaise express kiya ja sakta hai...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

you are too good bhai Intezaar........
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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2011, 07:26:12 AM »


Jane kaisa ye dard hai jo hontho se bayaa.n na ho
kaheen in lafzo mein tere hi dard ki daastaa.n na ho

Palkein jhuka kar chalte hain hum unki gali se
ke phir unse milkar nigaahein pashemaa.n na ho

samet kar baahon mein unhe gujaar lete hain raat
karwat nahin badalte ke faasle phir darmaya.n na ho

Jalti saanso mein uljhi hain aahein kayi raaton se
magar ye jism jalkar bhi is aag mein dhuaa.n na ho

hum bhi kya nikle is bheegte mausam me tar laute
yun bhi aansuon me kisi ke dil ka aashiyaa.n na ho

wo samajhte hain ke hum juda ho chale hain unse lekin
aisa bi nahi k ab tak unke hotho pe mera nishaa.n na ho

wo aakar saahil par hi hume tabaah kar gaye ‘Intezar’
aur hum sochte the ki mazdhaar me kahin tufaa.n na ho… !


Shukriya
Intezar !








bahut hi khub intezar ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2011, 08:20:51 AM »
intzaar…
mindblowing creation…
karwat nahi bdalte…
superb mahasuperbb line…
end was amazing Usual Smile
hats off to u…
jb b aate ho chaap chhod jate ho…
daily aao yar…
be happy
god bless u
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2011, 08:39:01 AM »
Suresh ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya...

Intezar !

Intezar ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2011, 08:42:35 AM »
Rahim bhai aapka bahut bahut shukriya... aapne dil se padha aur pasand kiya bahut khushi huyi... aap hume bhoole nahi accha laga ... aap saath rehte ho humesha, achha lagta hai... aap humesha khush raho...

Intezar !

Haye..
Bata nahin sakta dil ko kitni khushi hui apki kalam dekh kar mere bhai..
Usual Smile Usual Smile
Aur akhri ashaar toh loot le gaya mujhe..
Kya baat hai mere bhai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2011, 08:55:03 AM »


Jane kaisa ye dard hai jo hontho se bayaa.n na ho
kaheen in lafzo mein tere hi dard ki daastaa.n na ho

Palkein jhuka kar chalte hain hum unki gali se
ke phir unse milkar nigaahein pashemaa.n na ho

samet kar baahon mein unhe gujaar lete hain raat
karwat nahin badalte ke faasle phir darmaya.n na ho

Jalti saanso mein uljhi hain aahein kayi raaton se
magar ye jism jalkar bhi is aag mein dhuaa.n na ho

hum bhi kya nikle is bheegte mausam me tar laute
yun bhi aansuon me kisi ke dil ka aashiyaa.n na ho

wo samajhte hain ke hum juda ho chale hain unse lekin
aisa bi nahi k ab tak unke hotho pe mera nishaa.n na ho

wo aakar saahil par hi hume tabaah kar gaye ‘Intezar’
aur hum sochte the ki mazdhaar me kahin tufaa.n na ho… !


Shukriya
Intezar !







Bahut Bahut Aur Bahutttttttt Khoob Intezar ji..

Kya Kehne Bhai..Lajawaab Likha Hai Aapne..

Khaas Taur Pe 1rst,3rd,5th Aur 7nth Ashaar par Hazaaro daad..

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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2011, 02:18:35 PM »
bht bht khoob intezar ji...
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2011, 02:33:21 PM »
bahut khub intzar ji koi jawab nahi ,koi alfaz nahi taarif ke liye Applause Applause Applause
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Intezar
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«Reply #13 on: June 29, 2011, 01:01:28 PM »
Shukriya Anaam ji aap ne pasand kiya, tahe dil se shukriya...

Intezar !

dard ko ess se behtar aur kaise express kiya ja sakta hai...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

you are too good bhai Intezaar........
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«Reply #14 on: June 29, 2011, 01:02:33 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Marhoom bahayaat ji...

Intezar !


bahut hi khub intezar ji

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