Fana________________Baadal

by baadal102 on June 09, 2010, 06:48:06 AM
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Maut ko gale ab lagana chahta hu mai,
Mita ke khud ko tere kabil bana.na chahta hu mai,
Na soch ke mai be-wafa hu,
Fana ho ke apni wafa dikhana chahta hu mai.....




Baadal
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2010, 12:59:43 PM »
Wah Baadal-ji good lines..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye tou hai jag-jaahir fitrat Baadal ki
Khud khalee hokar bujhata pyaas sab-ki

Hai kyu nahee bharosa tumko apnee wafa par
Jo fana hokar,maut ko gale lagana chahte ho



Quote from: baadal102 on June 09, 2010, 06:48:06 AM

Maut ko gale ab lagana chahta hu mai,
Mita ke khud ko tere kabil bana.na chahta hu mai,
Na soch ke mai be-wafa hu,
Fana ho ke apni wafa dikhana chahta hu mai.....




Baadal
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tamanna.pt
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2010, 01:14:33 AM »

  Nice lines Badal ji. Thumbs UP
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tamanna.pt
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2010, 01:16:31 AM »

   Aapne bhi achha saath diya Koyal Sister. Nice lines.
Quote from: KOYAL46 on June 09, 2010, 12:59:43 PM
Wah Baadal-ji good lines..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye tou hai jag-jaahir fitrat Baadal ki
Khud khalee hokar bujhata pyaas sab-ki

Hai kyu nahee bharosa tumko apnee wafa par
Jo fana hokar,maut ko gale lagana chahte ho
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2010, 06:19:17 AM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on June 09, 2010, 12:59:43 PM
Wah Baadal-ji good lines..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye tou hai jag-jaahir fitrat Baadal ki
Khud khalee hokar bujhata pyaas sab-ki



good reply koyal ji & thanx a lot

Hai kyu nahee bharosa tumko apnee wafa par
Jo fana hokar,maut ko gale lagana chahte ho
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2010, 06:20:23 AM »
Quote from: tamanna.pt on June 10, 2010, 01:14:33 AM
  Nice lines Badal ji. Thumbs UP


bahut bahut sukria tamana ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2010, 12:50:00 PM »

Thanks a lot Tamanna-di.....
Quote from: tamanna.pt on June 10, 2010, 01:16:31 AM
   Aapne bhi achha saath diya Koyal Sister. Nice lines.
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2010, 12:52:04 PM »
Shukriya Baadalji.....ab aur kab barsoge ?


Quote from: baadal102 on June 10, 2010, 06:19:17 AM
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2010, 02:39:57 PM »
koyal ji barasna to mari kismat mai hai
kabhi apne gum pe to kabhi yaro ke gum pe
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2010, 11:03:50 AM »
Baadal-ji Khush kismat ho jo barasne ka mila tumhein vardaan......

Kismat ka likha tou mita nahi sakta koi
Par ye Kyu,tum kewal gum mein baraste ho
Gum mai tou barasti hai hum sab ki aakhen
Tum kabhi khushi mai bhee tou baras jaao

Quote from: baadal102 on June 12, 2010, 02:39:57 PM
koyal ji barasna to mari kismat mai hai
kabhi apne gum pe to kabhi yaro ke gum pe
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2010, 07:34:53 PM »


    tujhe yaqeen ho to bunn jao mere sada ke liye,
    warna yahan wafa ka koi meqdaar nahin hota,
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2010, 07:35:55 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on June 13, 2010, 11:03:50 AM
Baadal-ji Khush kismat ho jo barasne ka mila tumhein vardaan......

Kismat ka likha tou mita nahi sakta koi
Par ye Kyu,tum kewal gum mein baraste ho
Gum mai tou barasti hai humsab ki aakhen
Tum kabhi khushi mai bhee tou baras jaao


very nice koyal ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2010, 09:10:20 AM »
Thanks.....

Quote from: kameeney on June 14, 2010, 07:35:55 PM
very nice koyal ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2010, 08:14:35 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Baadal ji...!!! bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2010, 08:15:20 PM »
bahut khoob Koyal ji...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on June 13, 2010, 11:03:50 AM
Baadal-ji Khush kismat ho jo barasne ka mila tumhein vardaan......

Kismat ka likha tou mita nahi sakta koi
Par ye Kyu,tum kewal gum mein baraste ho
Gum mai tou barasti hai hum sab ki aakhen
Tum kabhi khushi mai bhee tou baras jaao
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