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koi manzil nahi koi sahara nahi
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jindagi ki kasti ke bharose hum baithe the
magar beech majdhaar me usne utara nahi [/b][/color][/color] |
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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2012, 08:12:47 PM » |
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gd beech majdhr mei.n nahi usne tumhe choda bharosa bata tera dost kaha hai usne toda koi manzil nahi koi sahara nahi
dukhon ke samandar ka koi kinara nahi
jindagi ki kasti ke bharose hum baithe the
magar beech majdhaar me usne utara nahi [/b][/color][/color] |
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2012, 08:17:52 PM » |
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dhanyawad manoj ji bahut hi sahi kaha aapne
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2012, 08:20:32 PM » |
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if i am right,than title is wrong dhanyawad manoj ji bahut hi sahi kaha aapne
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2012, 08:23:41 PM » |
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magar aapne samjha hi nahi use jindagi pr itna bharosa tha ki woh use beech me hi chod deti magar usne choda nahi
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2012, 08:27:12 PM » |
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yahi to janab hum kah rahe hai farab kiya kaha kisi ka bharosa todna he fareb hai magar aapne samjha hi nahi use jindagi pr itna bharosa tha ki woh use beech me hi chod deti magar usne choda nahi
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2012, 08:37:26 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: August 13, 2012, 08:40:28 PM » |
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ye to sir meri najar me sabse bada fareb hai kyunki bharosa tutne pr umeed toot jaati hai aur umeed aadmi tabhi dekhta hai jab woh sabse jyada bebas hota hai
waise mujhe sahi laga isliye title de diya agar aapko dena hota to aap kya dete
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2012, 08:44:05 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2012, 08:45:25 PM » |
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thanks for suggestion sir
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«Reply #10 on: August 13, 2012, 08:47:25 PM » |
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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2012, 08:50:48 PM » |
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waise main likh deta hoon magar title me hamesha confuse rehta hoon jo us samay man me aa jata hai wahi de deta hoon
aur haan sir mere saath koi fareb ka case nahi hua hai
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2012, 09:18:09 PM » |
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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2012, 09:50:12 PM » |
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koi manzil nahi koi sahara nahi
dukhon ke samandar ka koi kinara nahi
jindagi ki kasti ke bharose hum baithe the
magar beech majdhaar me usne utara nahi [/b][/color][/color] doobegi naav toh aankh khulegi kagaz ki naav kab tak chelega... |
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2012, 01:35:06 AM » |
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on eTI community..
