Fitaratan....manju

by manjum on June 21, 2011, 03:59:01 AM
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Fitaratan hamne fir gham ko chuna hai.
Khushi ka raaz kab hamne suna hai.

Waqt-e-rukhshat hamne bhi aawaz di thi,
Bhid thi aur shor bhi kisne suna hai.

Khud hi ham ismain uljhe machhliyan ki tarah,
Aur yah jaal bhi hamne khud buna hai.

Suna hai sath waqt ke gham beet jata hai,
Wo har ik yaad ab sau sau guna hai.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2011, 04:29:03 AM »
fitratan…
wah bht khub ji…

apni fitrat ko chupaana nahi aasaan
………dard ka bayan to aapki muskurahat bhi karti hai!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2011, 05:02:12 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya niralaji....

sath rahie.......
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2011, 05:56:51 AM »
Fitaratan hamne fir gham ko chuna hai.
Khushi ka raaz kab hamne suna hai.

Waqt-e-rukhshat hamne bhi aawaz di thi,
Bhid thi aur shor bhi kisne suna hai.

Khud hi ham ismain uljhe machhliyan ki tarah,
Aur yah jaal bhi hamne khud buna hai.

Suna hai sath waqt ke gham beet jata hai,
Wo har ik yaad ab sau sau guna hai.

manju "mann

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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2011, 06:01:44 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya adilji...

sath rahie...
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2011, 08:11:57 AM »
Fitaratan hamne fir gham ko chuna hai.
Khushi ka raaz kab hamne suna hai.

Waqt-e-rukhshat hamne bhi aawaz di thi,
Bhid thi aur shor bhi kisne suna hai.

Khud hi ham ismain uljhe machhliyan ki tarah,
Aur yah jaal bhi hamne khud buna hai.

Suna hai sath waqt ke gham beet jata hai,
Wo har ik yaad ab sau sau guna hai.

manju "mann"



Waah waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Anjuji..Har Ek A'shaar lajawaab!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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manjum
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2011, 09:35:04 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji....

sath rahie..
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Anshumali
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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2011, 10:48:00 AM »
Fitaratan hamne fir gham ko chuna hai.
Khushi ka raaz kab hamne suna hai.

Waqt-e-rukhshat hamne bhi aawaz di thi,
Bhid thi aur shor bhi kisne suna hai.

Khud hi ham ismain uljhe machhliyan ki tarah,
Aur yah jaal bhi hamne khud buna hai.

Suna hai sath waqt ke gham beet jata hai,
Wo har ik yaad ab sau sau guna hai.

manju "mann"


Good One ... Manjum Ji !

dilee mubaaraqbaad aur dheroN daad !!
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2011, 01:02:52 PM »
bht bht khoob di...
very nice..
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