Gam ki aas

by vinery on September 26, 2015, 06:33:42 PM
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Dil me mera koi armaan na rakhna
Ab mujhse koi pehchaan na rakhna
Kuch aisi baatein unki yaad aa gayi aaj
Aur tum puchh rahe ho hamse gam ka raaz
Jaanti hun gam baatne se kam hota hai lekin
Unka diya hua gam hi hai ek meri aas
Agar woh bhi baat du to unka kya rahega mere paas!
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2015, 07:50:56 PM »
Nice pooja
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2015, 08:44:40 PM »
Quote from: vinery on September 26, 2015, 06:33:42 PM
Dil mein meraa koi armaan naa rakhnaa
Ab mujhse koi pehchaan na rakhnaa
Kuchh aisi baatein unki yaad aa gayi aaj
Aur tumh poochh rahe ho hamse gham ka raaz
Jaanti hun gham baatne se kam hota hai lekin
Unhkaa diyaa huaa gham hi hai ek meri aas
Agar woh bhi baant dun to unhkaa kyaa rahegaa mere paas!
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Pooja jee bahut hee khoobsurat likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaa. Maain ne aapke likhe huey laafzon ko sound ke hisaab se  change kiyaa hai jo main neechey note kar rahaa hoon.
mera = meraa     na = naa     rakhna = rakhnaa
Kuch = Kuchh
tum = tumh     puchh = poochh    gam = gham
unka = unhkaa     diya = diyaa     
baat = baant     du = dun     


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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2015, 04:15:45 AM »
Thank you so much, Shikha ji.
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2015, 04:18:00 AM »
Thank you so much, Surindar ji.
Thank you for your help. I will keep these things in mind.
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2015, 09:36:44 AM »
वाह वाह खुबसूरत पेशकश
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2015, 11:01:36 AM »
bohat khubsurat pooja ji waaaaahhhhhhh
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«Reply #7 on: September 28, 2015, 03:52:51 AM »
Thank you so much, Rastogi jee.
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«Reply #8 on: September 28, 2015, 07:53:00 AM »
Thank you so much, Jeet jee.
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