-----/// Geele se kuch lamhein hain ///----- Hriday

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kuch   os  ki   geeli  boondein  hain
kuch   geele   se  woh  sawere hain
mere    geele   se    us    takiye   pe
bas  geele   se  kuch  lamhein  hain

jo    tanhaa   akele   kaatein   hain
woh tanhaa   si  meri  raatein hain
hai   ab   saath     nahi   koi   mere
yaadein   hain,  bas   yaadein  hain

kabhi    shaam   sunehri   hoti  thi
kabhi    raat     nashili     hoti   thi
un lamhon  ki  kuch  yaadein hain
jo  saath  humne  guzaarein  hain

nagmein  hain, kuch  shikwe  hain
kuch  aadhi   adhuri baatein  hain
kuch toote huwe se kasmein hain
aur  kuch  aadhe  se afsaane main






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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2016, 09:12:11 AM »
Har baar ki tarha bahot khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2016, 11:32:49 AM »
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ek purani kitaab ke kuch geele se panne hain
tumpe likhe kuch sher mere aur sunehre sapne hain


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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2016, 04:19:23 PM »
Bahut khoob janaab.  Bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2016, 07:01:38 PM »



kuch   os  ki   geeli  boondein  hain
kuch   geele   se  woh  sawere hain
mere    geele   se    us    takiye   pe
bas  geele   se  kuch  lamhein  hain

jo    tanhaa   akele   kaatein   hain
woh tanhaa   si  meri  raatein hain
hai   ab   saath     nahi   koi   mere
yaadein   hain,  bas   yaadein  hain

kabhi    shaam   sunehri   hoti  thi
kabhi    raat     nashili     hoti   thi
un lamhon  ki  kuch  yaadein hain
jo  saath  humne  guzaarein  hain

nagmein  hain, kuch  shikwe  hain
kuch  aadhi   adhuri baatein  hain
kuch toote huwe se kasmein hain
aur  kuch  aadhe  se afsaane main

Janaab yeh aakhri line samajh nahin aayi...
Aur kuchh adhure se yeh afssne hain?



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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2016, 07:05:05 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2016, 02:22:46 AM »
yet again a master piece ...bhai kya batayen,tarif ke liye alfaaz kam hai...bahut khub Applause ek rau ke saath..
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2016, 12:31:13 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2016, 05:39:34 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rustum ji....!!!

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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2016, 05:40:15 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sps ji....!!!

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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2016, 07:43:56 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Arjun ji....!!!

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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2016, 05:51:01 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Surindar ji....!!!


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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2016, 05:07:42 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Adil ji....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2016, 06:14:04 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Jnyana ji....!!!

yet again a master piece ...bhai kya batayen,tarif ke liye alfaaz kam hai...bahut khub Applause ek rau ke saath..
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2016, 03:42:55 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji....!!!

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