Ghazal: hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke.....!

by DhavalRami on October 29, 2009, 05:25:33 PM
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

kuch ehsaas jo ek arse pehle kaaGaz pe utaare the.. aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN.. dil ke ehsaasoN ko kaaGaz pe laane ki ik ChhoTi si koShiSh uss waQt maine kii thee.. ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa saath Zaruur milegaa!

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hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke
baiThe rehte nahiN apnii aaNkhoN ko nam kar ke

naam mi'TaaYeNge teraa dil kii har dhaRkan par sey
tujH sey juRi hu'i yaadoN ko dil sey kam kar ke

bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay
karuN kyaa guzre laMhoN ko dil meiN faraaham kar ke

faraaham : i'kaTThaa

naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab
door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke

tumne hii banaayi thi ZiNdagi jannat si "Dhaval" kii
KhuSh ho aaj u.sii ziNdagi ko jahannam kar ke

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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2009, 05:59:50 PM »
JSK !

Waah Dhaval ji... Bahoot Bakoobi se dard ko Lafzo mea utaara hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2009, 07:43:39 PM »
kya baat hai   dhaval ji....

HAM ROTE NAHIN TERE JAANE KA GHUM KARKE
KYUN GUJAARUN AB MEH ZINDAGI TUMHE YAAD KARKE
JAB TUNE HIMMAT KI HAI ZINDAGI JEENE KI HUM SE ALAG HOKE
HAM BHI JEE KAR DIKHAYENGE APNI ZINDAGI TUMSE JUDAA HOKE.
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2009, 10:10:10 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Dhaval ji n  Cara ji,very touching gazal,lovely creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2009, 12:32:39 PM »
Dhaval Ji aapne bahut hi khubsurati se dard ko utara hai apne alfajo mein humne aapki last ki ye char line bahut hi pasand aai 


naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab
door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke

tumne hii banaayi thi ZiNdagi jannat si "Dhaval" kii
KhuSh ho aaj u.sii ziNdagi ko jahannam kar ke

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Nice work and excellent creation Dhaval Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2009, 12:34:14 PM »

HAM ROTE NAHIN TERE JAANE KA GHUM KARKE
KYUN GUJAARUN AB MEH ZINDAGI TUMHE YAAD KARKE
JAB TUNE HIMMAT KI HAI ZINDAGI JEENE KI HUM SE ALAG HOKE
HAM BHI JEE KAR DIKHAYENGE APNI ZINDAGI TUMSE JUDAA HOKE.

Cara Ji aapne bhi bahut hi acccha likha h Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2011, 06:09:02 PM »
Cara Ji aapne bhi bahut hi acccha likha h Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 20, 2011, 01:08:26 AM »
janaab Dhaval sahib

aadaab!
aap ka khoob soorat kalaam parrnay ko mila,,,,

waah dili daad qobool kijiyay..

aik baat keh aik aashiq ko to aisa kalam nahiN kehna chahiyay,,,,

mahboob ko to yaad hi kia jaata hae us ki bewafaai per bhi ,,, us ki dushnaam per bhi khushi ka izhaar hi karta hae aik aashiq..
aap to usay bhool jaanay ka ehd kar rahay haiN,,,,

sory naaraz nahin hona,,,
yoo'n hi aisa likh dia hae, maira maqsoood dil aazaari nahiN sirf mahboob baaray apne khayalaat ka izhaar matloob tha...

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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2011, 11:54:09 PM »
very nice bohat bohat khoob dhaval saheb
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