Ghazal: jaanaa thaa maine tujh ko tujh se bhee zyaadaaH...!

by DhavalRami on December 18, 2009, 05:34:39 PM
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

namaskaar aur Aadaab!

aik baar fir se apni koShiSh ko liye bazm meiN fir se haaZir ho rahaa huuN... ummid kartaa huuN aap sab ko mere yeh ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge aur har baar ki taraH aapkaa pyaar aur saath mujhe Zaruur mileNgaaa!... aap sab ki Qeemtee raa'ey ka iNtezaar raheNgaa... mulA'iizaa farmaayeN!

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jaanaa thaa maine tujh ko tujh se bhee zyaadaaH
chaahaa thaa maine tujh ko had se bhee zyaadaaH

aitbaar tujh pe thaa kiyaa Khud se bhee zyaadaaH
maanaa thaa maine tujh ko rab se bhee zyaadaaH

baiThaa huN taNhaa kone meiN gumsum saa maiN
yaad ti'ri aaj to aati hai kal se bhee zyaadaaH

aayiiN kahaaN se kaDwaahaT dil meiN tere
baateN ti'ri haseeN thi bahot gul se bhee zyaadaaH

meree duaa haii tujh ko mil jaayeN " saathii "
kismat ti'ree achchhi ho "Dhaval " se bhee zyaadaaH

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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2009, 04:19:24 AM »
very touching and lovely gazal Dhaval ji.bahut hi acha likha aapne.excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2009, 08:17:06 AM »
Really good one Dhaval Ji
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2009, 09:05:01 AM »
BATAIN TERI HASEEN THI GUL SE BHI ZYADA.........VERI NAAICE.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2009, 12:34:24 PM »
Bahut Khub Dhaval jI
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2009, 05:43:40 PM »
very touching and lovely gazal Dhaval ji.bahut hi acha likha aapne.excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Madhuwesh jee:

namaste!

maiN aapka be_Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN! paRhte raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2010, 11:35:35 AM »
Really good one Dhaval Ji

bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h Rajesh jee:

paRhte raheN aage bhee!

aapka

~ Dhaval
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2010, 08:27:57 AM »
Wah Dhaval Bhai Wah.. Ehasaason Ko Lafzon Me Dhaal Kar Pesh Karna to Koi aapse Seekhe.. ek Ek Misra Behad Lajawab hai.. Alfaazon ko jis Khubsoorati ke sath Sajaaya hai aapne wo waqai Kaabil-e-Taareef Hai.. Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


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malli
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2010, 04:02:07 AM »
Bahut bahut accha laga padkar Dhawal ji  Thumbs UP
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2010, 03:41:35 PM »
BATAIN TERI HASEEN THI GUL SE BHI ZYADA.........VERI NAAICE.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

KhaamoSh aawaaz saaHeb/saaHibaa:

maiN aapka be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN... paRhte rahe.n yuuNhi!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2010, 04:04:49 PM »
Waah Waah Kya kahiye... Mashallah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai ... Bahoot dard se bhara ehsaas phiroye hai aapne.. Bahoot khoob!
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hameeda
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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2011, 09:09:27 PM »
bahut khoob ji..
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boht khoob dhaval ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2012, 03:18:28 PM »
Bahut khub
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