ghazal

by laaiba on May 11, 2012, 11:54:12 AM
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ghazal likhne kee koshish  Feared.
            ghazal
  dil K daaMan main koi to aas rehne do
  chaNd yaaDein mere bhi paas rehne do

  taluq to khatm ho hee chukay hain lekin
  pyar kee thoddi dil mein bass rehne do
  chalo tum bhool jaayo pyar kee baatein
  main hoo tanhaa to mujhe be aas rehne do
  rooh main muhabbat hee ko utaaraa tha
  baaqi ab dard kaa ehhsaas rehne do
  apni manzil ko paa kar meira mat socho
  kia hai meiraa mujhe uudaas rehne do....
  laaiba ali angel11
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2012, 12:06:18 PM »
Good one Laaiba Jee  Thumbs UP
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soudagar
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2012, 12:16:21 PM »
bahut khub....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2012, 12:30:34 PM »
khoob!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2012, 12:40:53 PM »
kaamyaab koshish dheron daad aur ek rau
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laaiba
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2012, 03:15:57 PM »
Good one Laaiba Jee  Thumbs UP
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thnku ....
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2012, 03:16:52 PM »
bahut khub....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
bohat shukria...
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2012, 03:17:41 PM »
khoob!!!
shukria...
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2012, 03:18:44 PM »
kaamyaab koshish dheron daad aur ek rau
bohat shukria sir aapka hosla afzai ka thnku ...
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2012, 07:34:31 PM »
  Laibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Masha Allaah jee kia kahne waaH jee waaH bahut khoob jee
bahut umdaa... badi achchi kalaam kahi hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaas O khayaal gazab ke rahe jee.. kia kahne waaH
badi pyaari kalaam kahi hai.. Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rhaiye... aate rahiye...

HaaN dusre ashaar ka kafiyaa " bass" dusre kafiyoN meiN
shamil nahi hoNga so us sher ko dusre kafiye se badl dijiye.. Usual Smile


Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2012, 02:55:43 AM »
bahut sundar laabiaji...


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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2012, 03:08:21 AM »
bohtu khub laiba jai likhte rahiye
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mkv
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2012, 07:27:48 AM »
Good One Laaiba jee

appreciable effort..keep trying..

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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2012, 09:43:20 AM »
bahut bahut khoobsurat laaibaji...

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«Reply #14 on: May 14, 2012, 08:59:12 AM »
ghazal likhne kee koshish  Feared.
            ghazal
  dil K daaMan main koi to aas rehne do
  chaNd yaaDein mere bhi paas rehne do

  taluq to khatm ho hee chukay hain lekin
  pyar kee thoddi dil mein bass rehne do
  chalo tum bhool jaayo pyar kee baatein
  main hoo tanhaa to mujhe be aas rehne do
  rooh main muhabbat hee ko utaaraa tha
  baaqi ab dard kaa ehhsaas rehne do
  apni manzil ko paa kar meira mat socho
  kia hai meiraa mujhe uudaas rehne do....
  laaiba ali angel11

bahut khoob ashaar haiN ji... behad pasand aayaa kalaam aapka


taluq to khatm ho hee chukay hain lekin
  pyar kee thoddi dil mein bass rehne do

kya hi khoob baat kahi hai ............. kya hi khoob

 kia hai meiraa mujhe uudaas rehne do....


....akhri misraa to bahut hi umdaa byaan huaa hai .,.  zaraa sa behr pe dhyaan diyaa jaye to aur bhi nikhar jayegi gahzal..

likhti raheN
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