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Har palak ke sahil pe samandar nahi hote..
Har hath ke naseeb me saaghar nahi hote..

Chaddar ki qeemat samjhenge nahi aap,
Miyaan unse puchho, jinke ghar nahi hote..

Hausla deta hai hamari udaan ko jigar,
Ham udte hain, halaanki par nahi hote..

Tum dil se mere kabhi nikal na paaogi,
Ke dilon ki deewaaron pe dar nahi hote..

Kal deedar se unke behal'ti thi nazrein,
Aaj kal kyun aise manzar nahi hote.. ??


Ghamon ne 'Zaif', saunpi hai qalam hamko,  
Warna baakhuda*, hum shaayar nahi hote..
(* khuda qasam)
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2013, 03:35:53 AM »
Har palak ke sahil pe samandar nahi hote..
Har hath ke naseeb me saaghar nahi hote..

Chaddar ki qeemat samjhenge nahi aap,
Miyaan unse puchho, jinke ghar nahi hote..

Hausla deta hai hamari udaan ko jigar,
Ham udte hain, halaanki par nahi hote..

Tum dil se mere kabhi nikal na paaogi,
Ke dilon ki deewaaron pe dar nahi hote..

Kal deedar se unke behal'ti thi nazrein,
Aaj kal kyun aise manzar nahi hote.. ??


Ghamon ne 'Zaif', saunpi hai qalam hamko, 
Warna baakhuda*, hum shaayar nahi hote..
(* khuda qasam)



bahot khoob
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2013, 03:52:47 AM »
just fabulous creation bro... felt  roomaniyat while reading.... so it touched me...
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2013, 04:16:01 AM »
waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2013, 04:47:00 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2013, 04:53:47 AM »
wha wha kay baat
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2013, 06:31:20 AM »
Ghamon ne 'Zaif', saunpi hai qalam hamko, 
Warna baakhuda*, hum shaayar nahi hote..

Bahut khoob Zaif jee
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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2013, 08:07:16 AM »
Har palak ke sahil pe samandar nahi hote..
Har hath ke naseeb me saaghar nahi hote..

Chaddar ki qeemat samjhenge nahi aap,
Miyaan unse puchho, jinke ghar nahi hote..

Hausla deta hai hamari udaan ko jigar,
Ham udte hain, halaanki par nahi hote..

Tum dil se mere kabhi nikal na paaogi,
Ke dilon ki deewaaron pe dar nahi hote..

Kal deedar se unke behal'ti thi nazrein,
Aaj kal kyun aise manzar nahi hote.. ??


Ghamon ne 'Zaif', saunpi hai qalam hamko, 
Warna baakhuda*, hum shaayar nahi hote..
(* khuda qasam)




Zaif jee.khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai.
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2013, 06:07:46 PM »
Har palak ke sahil pe samandar nahi hote..
Har hath ke naseeb me saaghar nahi hote..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Chaddar ki qeemat samjhenge nahi aap,
Miyaan unse puchho, jinke ghar nahi hote..

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Hausla deta hai hamari udaan ko jigar,
Ham udte hain, halaanki par nahi hote..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tum dil se mere kabhi nikal na paaogi,
Ke dilon ki deewaaron pe dar nahi hote..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kal deedar se unke behal'ti thi nazrein,
Aaj kal kyun aise manzar nahi hote.. ??

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Ghamon ne 'Zaif', saunpi hai qalam hamko, 
Warna baakhuda*, hum shaayar nahi hote..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
(* khuda qasam)

Ek rau ke saath dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2013, 08:46:18 PM »

Har palak ke sahil pe samandar nahi hote..
Har hath ke naseeb me saaghar nahi hote..

Chaddar ki qeemat samjhenge nahi aap,
Miyaan unse puchho, jinke ghar nahi hote..

Tum dil se mere kabhi nikal na paaogi,
Ke dilon ki deewaaron pe dar nahi hote..

Wwwwwwwaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Zaif ji .... ek zabardast qalaam raha .... is baakamaal ghazal par dheron daad aur oopar likhe aashaar par dheron se bhi zyaadaa daad Usual Smile


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«Reply #10 on: October 20, 2013, 08:48:55 PM »
wah wah kya kehne khubsoorat peahkash janaab bahut khub Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: October 20, 2013, 09:41:49 PM »
chupna rahno kuchna kahhno, darde jodai saihna sako
tumeri jan , jan-e- jaanhan hai tere bina main jina sako
Aaja tu bas ek hi bar dekhle mera hal hai kya
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2013, 12:58:09 AM »

Zaif Sahaab Aadaab...!


Kia baat hai janab bahut khoob bade khoob aur gehre ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye haiN aapne...

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janab ... par hume yeH quoted ashaar behad lajawaab lage...
Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...





Tum dil se mere kabhi nikal na paaogi,
Ke dilon ki deewaaron pe dar nahi hote..


Ghamon ne 'Zaif', saunpi hai qalam hamko, 
Warna baakhuda*, hum shaayar nahi hote..
(* khuda qasam)

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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2013, 04:48:01 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2013, 04:32:29 AM »
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waah waah waah waah Zaif ji, kyaa kehne, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hogi, bahut bahut bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!!
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