Gila kya kare?!

by ~princess~ on November 24, 2007, 05:24:05 PM
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Naraz hai hum Rab se koi aur ab hume manaye kyun
Jab likhein hain Ansun to ab phir mushkuraye kyun

Dil jala hai ab jism rakh hojaye to fark ab kya hoga
Dil hi to tha iske liye ab shokh manaye kyun

Be.rang mohobbat thi jo zindagi ko berang kargayi
Naam kisika khoon e jigar pe sajayein kyun

Lakh chaha ke hum bhi andekha kardein unhe milte waqt
Par gar bewafai usne ki to nazrein hum churaye kyun

Ankh jukhayenge to salam karenge milayenge to sabab puchenge
Hum to ab bhi unpe marte hai Dushmani jataye kyun?

Marham lane bheja tha wo zeher laye humari rukhsat ko
Dil na mila na sahi..ab Mehboob k hathon k zeher ko thukraye kyun

Nadaan hain wo jo dawaa karte hai mohobbat ko bhul jane ka
Hum un fareebi-jhooton mein milkar yeh jhoot fehlaye kyun

Sajda kiya hai uska manga hai usse khuda se meine
Ab kismat mein yaar nai to is ishq pe pachtaye kyun???


~roshni~
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2007, 07:44:25 PM »
very good very nice keep it up "Princess" ji

apni zindagi ko yu ruswa na kijiye
apni khushhaali zindagi ko yu barbaad na  kijiye


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Muskan~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2007, 10:39:37 PM »
Bohat khoob Roshni...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2007, 10:44:58 PM »
Roshu

Wah ! wah ! wah ! =D>

Superb !
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2007, 07:06:04 AM »
Well said.. Kyun...

Ques...
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~princess~
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2007, 04:52:48 PM »
thxx to all
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muskan_bye
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2007, 06:20:54 PM »
ur welcome

or aap aise hi likhte  rahena
or aap aise derd zahir karna

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Muskan~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2008, 08:41:55 PM »
Bahut khoob roshu,bahut hi acha likha hai..kahin na kahin zindagi ki sachaiyon se judi hai aapki likhi hui kavita...heart-touching Usual Smile

Apne dil ko hum yeh kaise samjhaye
unki talaash mein jaaye to kahan jaaye..

jab door hi jana tha to kuch to,
apne kadmo ke nishaan chod jaate
mohabbat ki duniya se jo uthe unke kadam,
aakhir phir kis jahan pe rukh paaye

roothna bhi hai to apno ke beech mein roothna
zaroori nahi ke har shaks tumhe aakar manaye

alwida kehkar door chale jate to
kuch to tasalli hoti
"khwaish" kahi intezaar mein na mar jaaye

log kehte hai ke beete yaadon ko bhool ke
jeena hi haqeeqat hai zindagi ki,
par jab mohabbat ho dil se to
jisse hum chaahte hai woh hamara aks ban jaata hai....

koi bhala phir apne aap ko kaise bhool paaye Crying

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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2008, 07:15:09 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2008, 07:25:53 PM »
shukriya sahoodji...par roshu ne kuch na likha sad5 Embarrased
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2008, 07:31:37 PM »
good one roshu and khwaish ji!!
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~princess~
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2008, 09:08:18 PM »
Awesom Big bro.....too gud


Rab kare Tujhe kisi rah mein sacha pyar miljaye
Dua hai tujhe Duniya ki khushi beshumar miljaye

Hum to parchai hain teri har pal tere saath hai
Tanhai ka lamha aye aur kuch waqt tere sath miljaye

Bhikarne ke khayal se hum darte the kabhi iskadar
dil laggaya tutne se tut jaun aisa koi khayal miljaye

Tum dard dete ho yeh bhi to tumhari Inayaat hai
tujhe yaad karke rone ko kash phir yaad miljaye

Hum diwane hai tere pyar ke Par teri berukhi bhi katil hai
Chahe tu bhi kisiko Diwano jaise aisa koi dildar miljaye

Ke phir uthein charche aur tum Hume yaad karo
Dua hai naam mere tera isi Bahane koi pal miljaye

Pagal to hum hi hain jo tut kar aaj bhi chahte hai tumhe
Jo desake is diwangi ka jawab aisa hi koi sawal miljaye


~Roshni~
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«Reply #12 on: January 24, 2008, 09:12:43 PM »
wah kaya baat hai roshu.. tooooo good!!! yah lines bahoot achi lagi

Tum dard dete ho yeh bhi to tumhari Inayaat hai
tujhe yaad karke rone ko kash phir yaad miljaye
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2008, 09:14:39 PM »
kya baat hai!!! meri chweeeet sis bahut khoob..har ek line dil ko chuti hai
par demand bahut hai roshu??har post mein kehta hoon,kuch to likho
par likhti hi nahi..par jab likhti hai to sab ko chup kar deti hai..
bahut khoob roshu... :D Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2008, 09:21:04 PM »
Hahahaha nai bro aisi baat nai.....bas aj kal likhne ka mann nai karta...par aap kehte ho to mana bhi to nai karsakte

well thanks a lot pooja di and kitu bhaya
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