GLOOMY SUNDAY

by akela on October 17, 2004, 08:02:44 PM
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GLOOMY SUNDAY

Sunday is gloomy, my hours are slumberless.
 Dearest, the shadows I live with are numberless.
 Little white flowers will never awaken you,
not where the black coach of sorrow has taken you.
 Angels have no thought of ever returning you.
Would they be angry if I thought of joining you?[NM]

                                                    Reszo seress
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akela
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«Reply #1 on: October 28, 2004, 08:31:38 PM »
ki ek dil ki daastan aaj mai bhi suna du,
shayad aaj raat chand phir nahi nikalega.{NM}
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2004, 09:48:39 PM »
Nice AKELA!!!!
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2004, 03:33:06 AM »
No offense please!

Chaand bhi tho kithna
akela hei ji
magar lub pei na shikva
na shikaayat hei phir bhi

chaand isiliye shaayar ko
bhhaata hei shaayad
haaley dil sabka
milaatha hei shaayad

jo bhi kehna ho
chaand sei keh do
vo sabki sunega
aur apni kuchh nahin kahega
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Suhas
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2004, 03:41:23 AM »
wow...Beena Jain ji.
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akela
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2004, 06:44:45 PM »
offence?Huh? u mean offence beena ji.i dunoo why u said that,but that was preety good one.

aapke liye ...
kahne ko tho bahoot kuch tha chand se,
par kahne mai bhi ek samasya thi,
tyaar hokar nikale jab hum chaand dekhne,
tho pata chala aaj amawasya thi.
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2004, 04:32:14 PM »
Mere nehley pei dehla? Bahoot khoob akela ji. Aur dehley pei koi gyarrah nahin hota kya? Hota tho hei, neechey pado zara, pado pado!  :wink:

amaavas ho chaahey
ho poonam ki raat
chaand tho shaayer ka khhuda hei
phir shaayar kyun maangey deedar?
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akela
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«Reply #7 on: November 02, 2004, 01:39:50 PM »
hmmmmmmmm nice beena ji .aapke naahle pe dahla karne ki meri auukat hi kya hai.....par phir bhi..

shayar bhi muskura jatte hai chand dekhkar,
jab dil unka kabhi uddas hota hai,
pa chand ko khuda tho nahi kah sakte mere dost
kyuki usme bhi  tho daag hota hai.
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #8 on: November 02, 2004, 04:19:11 PM »
Bahut sahi likhha hei akela ji, shukriya!

hum dikhhaaney chaley thhey
chaand ko diya
hum kithney chhotey hein maloom hua
jub suraj saamney aaya (Idea here is not mine please!)
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akela
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«Reply #9 on: November 02, 2004, 09:24:39 PM »
shukariya aapka.......auur kya khoob kah hai aapne...

dil mai mere gamo ka mela na hota,
jo taqdeer ne khel khela na hota,
jo chand nikal jata aaj ki raat..
tho phir mai bhi 'akela' na hota.
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: November 02, 2004, 09:30:11 PM »
Nice Beena ji and Akela ji!!!
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akela
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«Reply #11 on: November 04, 2004, 12:25:06 PM »
shukariya pooja ji
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2004, 06:52:29 PM »
akela ji, aapney ithni dil ki gehraai sei baat likhh di, apney paas jawaab nahin hei ji, shaayad apna dil ithna gehra nahin hei ji.
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akela
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«Reply #13 on: November 05, 2004, 07:03:49 PM »
aisa na kahiya....beena ji....aapke shyari mai bahoot dard hota hai.....
mai aapke samne kuch bhi nahi.......
 aapke liye....
 kaash mera yeh aarmaan pura ho jaye...
phir chahe tere dar par jaan nikal jaye
jaise aaj mere karib ho tum dost..
waise hi yeh jindagi tamam nikal jaye.
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