Gum kahan tak chupaye koi.....

by Naya_Daur on January 17, 2007, 10:51:15 AM
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Naya_Daur
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Gum kahan tak chupaye koi
Zinda rehkar,pathar kab tak bane koi
Umar bar chahta raha dil jisko
Ek pal mein kaise usse bhula de koi

Paimana-e-sharab ek bahana hai saki
Ansuon ko sabke samne kaise peeye koi
Akele ho toh gujar jaye yeh zindagi
Har mehfil mein tanha kaise rahe koi

Har baat par badal jaatein hain log
Aaisi duniya par aitbar kab tak kare koi
Dhoka hi jab ban jaye IshQ
Har kissi ko dukh kaise baataye koi

Moha'bat ka sila jab ruswai se mile
Khudse murjim kab tak kehlaye koi
Jab zindagi hi nasoor ban jaye [/b]JEET
Toh phir maut ka intezar kab tak kare koi...
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2007, 11:16:32 AM »
Wah Jeet kaya baat hai.... bahoot khoob likha hai
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dewanadil
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2007, 06:21:23 PM »
itz too gud jeet..
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vikas2210
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2007, 06:25:50 PM »
Jeet bahi bahut khoob.............
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2007, 10:51:07 PM »
Quote from: "(((JEET)))"
Gum kahan tak chupaye koi
Zinda rehkar,pathar kab tak bane koi
Umar bar chahta raha dil jisko
Ek pal mein kaise usse bhula de koi

Paimana-e-sharab ek bahana hai saki
Ansuon ko sabke samne kaise peeye koi
Akele ho toh gujar jaye yeh zindagi
Har mehfil mein tanha kaise rahe koi

Har baat par badal jaatein hain log
Aaisi duniya par aitbar kab tak kare koi
Dhoka hi jab ban jaye IshQ
Har kissi ko dukh kaise baataye koi

Moha'bat ka sila jab ruswai se mile
Khudse murjim kab tak kehlaye koi
Jab zindagi hi nasoor ban jaye [/b]JEET
Toh phir maut ka intezar kab tak kare koi...


wonderful   Jeet..............   bahot  accha likha  aap  ne.....
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pinky
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2007, 01:43:36 AM »
bahut khoob JEET..

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Paimana-e-sharab ek bahana hai saki
Ansuon ko sabke samne kaise peeye koi


Bahut khoob kaha hai..!!

Bewafai kar ke chhod gaya wo mujhe,
Apne aansuon ko maine chupaya bahut..

Ek din phir uski galati ko bhula kar..
Uske pyaar ko maine yaad kiya bahut..

Phir bhi na bhara jab dil mera uske dard se..
To usse baat kar ke maine apne dil ko tadpaya bahut..
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2007, 11:32:00 PM »
Thanks Pooja ,deewana dil, Vikas bhai, Waheed ,n Pinky

thanks pinky for such a nce reply
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2007, 12:07:44 AM »
Quote from: "pinky"
bahut khoob JEET..

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Paimana-e-sharab ek bahana hai saki
Ansuon ko sabke samne kaise peeye koi


Bahut khoob kaha hai..!!

Bewafai kar ke chhod gaya wo mujhe,
Apne aansuon ko maine chupaya bahut..

Ek din phir uski galati ko bhula kar..
Uske pyaar ko maine yaad kiya bahut..

Phir bhi na bhara jab dil mera uske dard se..
To usse baat kar ke maine apne dil ko tadpaya bahut..


kiye gile-shikawe unse humne bhi
ruthe aaise ke mana na sake phir kabhi

yeh hijar-e-dard ko sambhala hai abhi tak
shayad barseinge jharne in ankhon se kabhi

umeed-e-low iss dil mein hamesha rahegi milan ki
iss janam mein,ya mile kissi aor jahan mein kabhi
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pinky
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2007, 01:39:00 AM »
bahut khoob JEET..
Ek baar fir bahut achchi lines likhi hain..

Unse Milne ki ummeed to shayad
Meri maut ke baad bhi na marre..
Par kya Wo kissi aur jahan mein,
Pehchaan lenge mujhe..??
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Shikha12
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2007, 01:59:33 AM »
That was really very nice work Jeet... and
Beautiful Replies... Pinki...

=D> =D>
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pinky
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2007, 02:01:24 AM »
hey thanx Shikha..!!!
Usual Smile
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2007, 02:07:35 AM »
Thanks Pinky n Shikha...

Pinky aapne khoob likha hai...

Iss jahan mein na nibha sake woh
aggle janam ki kya unse umeed rakhein
jo pehchan bi leinge kissi mord par
Jeet,woh tujhse mila na sakein nazarein...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2007, 02:18:20 AM »
Zakhm bhar gaya lekin dhaag ajj bhi hai
mere humdum teri mujhe pyaas abhi bhi hai

Jism se rooh tak tere liye mittaya hai maine
tu na sahi par tera ehsaas mere sath abhi bhi hai

Milenge hum kabhi har roz yeh socha hai maine
Toofano ne gira diye mere mehal,par khaak abhi bhi hai

mayuusi-e-malaal-e-moha'bbat kya fanaa kareingi
jaalte hue ashiane ki agg na sahi JEET,par rakh toh abhi bhi hai....[/b][/color]
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pinky
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«Reply #13 on: January 21, 2007, 01:57:33 PM »
bahut khoob reply diya hai aapne JEET..

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Milenge hum kabhi har roz yeh socha hai maine
Toofano ne gira diye mere mehal,par khaak abhi bhi hai


bahut hi achchi lines hain..!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: February 12, 2007, 10:21:00 PM »
Wah kay abaat hai bahoot khoob  JEET, hamesha ki tarah bahoot hi ach alikha hai…


Toot kar kabhi kuch jurra nahi karta
Ansoo se kabhi jeevan chala nahi karta

Jisko na hua payaar ka ahsaas barso
Aise dil main, payaar kabhi jaga nahi karta

Apni Umeed per kar de basar chahe zindagi
Banjar jameen per, phool kabhi khila nahi karta

Khud per vishwaas aor vishwaas per yah zindagi
Apni hi zindagi per, koi jor kisi ka chala nahi karta!!!!
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