Hamne jab aaj apne parkhe hain..... mann

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Aankhon se ashq bahut chhalke hain.
hamne jab aaj apne parkhe hain.

jinse darr jate the darr sare,
rahte ham aaj unse darr ke hain.

jane kyon aaj tak wo ruthe rahe,
hare ham lakh jatan karke hain.

mann
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2013, 08:32:16 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2013, 09:03:13 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 30, 2013, 08:01:37 PM
Aankhon se ashq bahut chhalke hain.
hamne jab aaj apne parkhe hain.
wah waah sach kaha haiApplause Applause Applause
jinse darr jate the darr sare,
rahte ham aaj unse darr ke hain.
bohut achhe Applause Applause
jane kyon aaj tak wo ruthe rahe,
hare ham lakh jatan karke hain.
lajawab Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2013, 11:41:33 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 30, 2013, 08:01:37 PM
Aankhon se ashq bahut chhalke hain.
hamne jab aaj apne parkhe hain.

jinse darr jate the darr sare,
rahte ham aaj unse darr ke hain.

jane kyon aaj tak wo ruthe rahe,
hare ham lakh jatan karke hain.

mann

good,sir
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2013, 01:39:05 AM »
Bahut Umda.
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2013, 11:33:10 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya ambalikaji
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2013, 11:34:10 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sahalji
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2013, 11:44:50 AM »
nice likha hai aapne
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2013, 12:39:54 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 01, 2013, 02:40:35 PM »
Bahut khoooob...
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«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2013, 04:16:17 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #11 on: October 01, 2013, 07:23:07 PM »
Aankhon se ashq bahut chhalke hain.
hamne jab aaj apne parkhe hain.


Bahut Khub Mann Ji



Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2013, 04:18:19 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on September 30, 2013, 08:01:37 PM
Aankhon se ashq bahut chhalke hain.
hamne jab aaj apne parkhe hain.

jinse darr jate the darr sare,
rahte ham aaj unse darr ke hain.

jane kyon aaj tak wo ruthe rahe,
hare ham lakh jatan karke hain.

mann


good  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #13 on: October 03, 2013, 07:36:23 PM »

Mann Jee Aadaab...!


Kia kahne jee kia kahne behad khoob aur gehre khayaalat bayaaN kiya hai aapne...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab...

In khoob aur umdaa ashaaroN per humaari hazaaroN dili daad O mubabrakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #14 on: October 11, 2013, 11:56:23 AM »
shukriya marhoomji
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