Harbar........ Aurat....

by manjum on March 03, 2011, 06:21:13 AM
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manjum
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dosto 8 march ko mahila divas hai.... ek purani rachna jo ab tak jisne suni pasand ki hai...... ummid hai aap pasand karenge.

....Jab Ram ne
meri agnipariksha li
fir bhi mujhe tyag kar
van main bheja
   tab main Seeta nahin thi.

Jab sirf ek vachan ko
nibhane ke lie
banaya gaya mujhe
panch patiyon ki patni
banta gaya mujhe
panch purushon main,
mujhe danv par lagaya
bhari sabha main
mujhe apmanit kiya
   tab main Dropadi nahin thi.

Jab Gautam rishi ne
mere charitra par shak kar
mujhe patthar ki banaya
varsho sataya,
   tab main Ahilya nahin thi.

Jab Ranaji ne
mujhe diya vish ka pyala
ghar aur samaj se nikala
   tab main Meera nahin thi.

Jab samaj ne
mujhe mere pati ki chita ke sath
zinda jalaya
mujhe sati banaya,
   tab main Roop kanwar nahin thi.

Jab Vyabhichariyon ne
meri asmat sare aam luti
meri nirmam hatya ki
   tab main............. nahin thi. (yahan auginat nam hain)

main
kabhi Seeta, kabhi Dropadi,
Kabhi Ahilya
ya kabhi Meera nahin thi..

yah sab hua mere sath
sirf islie
kyonki Harbar

hay! main
ek Aurat thi
Harbar sirf ek aurat.....

manjum "mann"
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2011, 06:40:00 AM »
no coments-----
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manjum
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2011, 06:42:28 AM »
are niralaji kya hua aapne kuch kaha nahin.....
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2011, 06:49:20 AM »
kuch kahna hi galat hoga --
aukaat hi nhi yaha kuch kahne ki
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manjum
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2011, 06:56:28 AM »
are kaise baat karte hain niralaji.... esa mat kahie.... kuchh to kahie.. pasand nahin aaya kya....
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2011, 07:07:37 AM »
pasand nahi aata to bahut kuch kahta tareef me
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manjum
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2011, 07:10:50 AM »
oh..... samjh gayeji......
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nirala
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2011, 07:25:14 AM »
hahaha bahut samajhdaar ho ji
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manjum
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2011, 07:32:39 AM »
nahinji hone ki koshish karte hain......hahaha
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nirala
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«Reply #9 on: March 03, 2011, 07:45:53 AM »
waah kya baat kahi.
jo samjhdaar hota hai wahi to kosis karte hain--
bewkoof log to kosis bhi nhi karte--jaise Nir
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manjum
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«Reply #10 on: March 03, 2011, 07:50:01 AM »
agar ye sach hai to bahut acha hai... hame bhi bewkufi sikha dijie... ye dard kam ho jayega........
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nirala
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«Reply #11 on: March 03, 2011, 07:52:55 AM »
bewkufiyat sikhaya nhi jaata ye to God Gifted vardaan hota hai mere jaise dilfarebon ko Usual Smile
aap nhi sikh sakte
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2011, 07:57:14 AM »
manjum ji bahot hi sidhi aur saral tarike se apne apni baat kahi he.........har lafj 100% sach he ...........

sach aurat ke bahot se roop he....lovely creation manjum ji......
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manjum
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«Reply #13 on: March 03, 2011, 07:59:58 AM »
han.... shayad dard sahna hi likha uparwale ne..... jyada samjhdari pagal kar dete hi.... dimag ki nasen fat jati hain........
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manjum
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«Reply #14 on: March 03, 2011, 08:01:37 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya matrixji..... sach kaha aapne par har roop main taqlif hi mili hai....... ye bhi sach hai.......
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