~*~Hatheliyaan~*~

by Aryaan on March 13, 2008, 12:44:31 AM
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2008, 12:49:38 AM »
Waah !! Kya baat hai Aryaan...bohot khoob....behad achca likha hai Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2008, 12:52:13 AM »
bahoot khoob Aryaan ji!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2008, 12:54:55 AM »
Kya baat hai Aryaan !

Bahut khoob Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2008, 12:57:05 AM »
Hatheliyon pe sajaya hai zakhm-e-dil humne
Rang-e-hina nahin khoon-e-jigar hai ye

Moti ki tarah samete hain behte hue ashk
Paani ka qatra nahin meri hatheliyon main !!
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2008, 01:00:16 AM »
Talat, Pooja & Rajbir..
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2008, 01:03:24 AM »
Hatheliyon pe sajaya hai zakhm-e-dil humne
Rang-e-hina nahin khoon-e-jigar hai ye

Moti ki tarah samete hain behte hue ashk
Paani ka qatra nahin meri hatheliyon main !!

Beautiful Reply Talat..
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2008, 01:06:17 AM »
Tallu

Behtareen reply Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2008, 01:13:49 AM »
bahut khoob ARYAAN...
talat bahut acha likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #9 on: March 13, 2008, 01:58:01 AM »
Bohot bohot shukriya Aryaan, Rajbir and Khwaish Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2008, 12:26:50 PM »
Bohat acha likha hai aapne Aryaan aur Talat Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: March 13, 2008, 01:57:01 PM »
nice one aryaan ji  Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2008, 02:33:57 PM »
Thank You Honey
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: March 14, 2008, 08:16:38 PM »
pata nahi yah app sab samjh sakege ya nahi..  lines kai baar padna.. shayad wo arth samjh aaye, jis arth ke sath maine yah likha hai...

Ahsaas tha mujhko tanhaai ka
Umeendo ke chirag phir bhi zinda the
Waqat ne jab di lakeere in hatho ko
Samjh ayya, hum hi kaha zinda the.......
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«Reply #14 on: March 14, 2008, 10:49:05 PM »
wah Aryaan ji, kya likkha hey aapne, bht accha laga... i like it.......
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