***hazaaron gam****

by kaushikbhawna008 on September 18, 2008, 06:22:49 AM
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kuch gam behisaab mile
to kuch daag beshumaar mile
is ishq mei ham tumhe kya batayein
k kitne zakhm hamei baar baar mile

raahein chuni thi saaf magar
thokrein baar baar mili
roshni ki chaht mei hamei
gam k andhere baar baar mile

chand khushi ki chahat mei
BHAWNA ne sab kuch apna gawa diya
raas na aa saki khushi magar
ashq aankhon mei beshumaar mile

luta kar khud ko is jahaan mei
tab khud ko samjh paayei ham
jinhe samjh rahe thei apna kabhi
unhi se mile hamei hazaaron gam
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2008, 06:30:50 AM »
 Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob likha hai bhawna dear... Thumbs UP
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khamosh.larka
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2008, 06:36:29 AM »
 hmmmmm  Wasy ab Mohabat lafzo ke Mohtaj hu gai ha ju feelings ko lafzo ke shape de kar paper per utarty hain. very nice Applause



We Never Stop Loving SomeOne But Learn to Live WithOut Them..
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2008, 07:54:41 AM »
thnk u honey ji
aur sahi kaha aapne khamosh ji becoz ham kisi ko pyaar karna kabhi nahi chodte par unke bina reh sake ye dua har waqt karte hain

thnks for comment
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baadal102
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2008, 04:50:46 PM »
bahut aacha likha hai bhawna ji




Baadal
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2008, 08:42:41 AM »
shukriya baadal ji
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2008, 06:25:28 AM »
mohobbat ki raahon par gam the beshumaar mile
hamne raah badal kar bhi dekh li kahi bhi chain-o-karar na mile
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2009, 01:08:18 AM »
Very nice and beautiful creation Kaushik B ji.mindblowing excellent icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2009, 02:50:54 AM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Bhawnaji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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