her pal ek sadi sa

by Pooja on January 18, 2010, 01:54:22 PM
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Pooja
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Her pal ko ek sadi sa jiya hai,
e- tanha raat ye tu jaane ya main jaanu...
her pal kaise maine jiya hai...

raat ke andhiare main, Gum ka andhkaar...
kisi ke sath ka us per intzaar...
e-intzaar yeh tu jaane ya main jaanu...

kaise maine intzaar ka her pal jiya hai...
her pal ek sadi sa ....
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cara
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2010, 02:05:41 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI   POOJA JI.....

IK IK PAL AISE BEETE JAISE BEETE SADIYA
TANHAI KE ANDHERON MEIN KAB AATI HAI NEENDIYAN.....
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2010, 02:16:30 PM »
Waah Bahoot Khoob Likha hai Pooja di...

Good one Cara !
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riyaz106
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2010, 04:25:19 PM »
It is a nice poem Pooja JI. Nice creation.
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2010, 05:57:36 PM »
bahoot bahoot shukaria Cara ji, Sophi and Riyaz ji!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2010, 06:19:36 PM »
Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji
Nice Line Cara Ji....

Pooja Ji Kuch Saal Pahle Likha Tha Isse
Par Shayad Post Kiya Bhi Ya Nahi Yaad Nahi
Khair Aapki Nazar Kar Raha Hun...Galti Maaf Ho Ji...!



    Tere Bina Yun Gadhiyan Beeti Jaise Sadiyan Beet Gayi
   Aankhein Hain Bebas Jaise Inse Neendiyan Rooth Gayi.
 
   Har Ghadi Guzarti Rahi Bas Ek Tere Hi Inzataar Mein
   Aur Sukhi Aankhon Se Jaise Koi Nadiyan Chhut Gayi.
 
  Bhoolne Ko To Mein Saare Dard Bhoola Deta ,Shihab
  Magar Khuhsh Rehne Ki Jaise Woh Aadat Si Chhut Gayi.
 
  Kyun Aaj Toote Hue Khwab Ke Sheese Chubne Lage
  Dil Hi Dil Mein  Jaise Kuch Tamanna,e Si Toot Gayi
 
  Aey Guzarne Wali Hawa Jakar Bas Unse Itna Keh Dena
  Ki Aapke Bina To Jaise Meri Saari Duniyan Hi Loot Gayi.
 

                  ( Shihab)




 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Too Good.. ek ek shabd.. kamaal likha hai shihab ji apne,... bahoot khoob...

Tha kuch bhi nahi zindagi main, jis ke khone ka dukh kare
Ehsaas mila, hone laga juda, khwabo ki tabeer ka, kis se hum gila kare

chahat bhi thi bas ek teri he chahat, timtimane jo lagi hai
Tu nahi, chahat nahi, per is dil ka bata, kaya sila kare

armaano ki bandish main, zajbaato ki be-skooni
apne he sawalo -jawabo main uljhi, socho ka kaya kiya kare

toote hai sirf kuch khawab.... e-dil ... haqiqat se kaise iska gila kare

Tha kuch bhi nahi zindagi main....
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2010, 06:41:14 PM »
shukaria Shihab ji!!!

Uljhati socho main, ashako ka sangma
doobati saanson main, dard ka tarunam
hai goom kalam, shabdo mai wo arth nahi
likhu to kaya likhu, apni soch per khud ka he bandhan....
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2010, 07:50:40 PM »
wow too Good Shihab ji!!!

Na Behla sake dil khud ka, na he koi mefil saja sake
tanhaa hui zindagi ka, tanhaai mai bhi, na daman chura sake

hey lubo per dard, shabdo mai jo ab dhalte nahi
NA wo samjhe hume kabhi, aor khud ko bhi na hum yeh samjha sake....

Na Behla sake dil khud ka, na he koi mefil saja sake...
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2010, 10:24:06 PM »
Too good Pooja ji,Cara ji,Shihab ji,very touching and wonderful creation.excellent. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2010, 08:03:42 AM »
Bahut khoob Pooja Ji, Cara Ji n Shihab Ji
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2010, 02:16:54 PM »
great lines pooja di.... Clapping Smiley

Tera sath bina jiya har ek pal sadi salagta he,
ab bas uss pal ka intezar he tera sath hamesa ke liye mill jaye,
ya fir ye zindgi hi khattm ho jaye....
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S.hashmi
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2010, 06:40:35 AM »
Very Beautiful lines Pooja ji
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2010, 12:55:56 PM »
Bahut Khub Pooja jI and Nice Response Shihab bhai and Devangi JI
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pankshivam
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«Reply #13 on: January 21, 2010, 11:32:31 AM »
Bahoot khoob Likha Poojaji
 Applause Applause Applause
Nice Replies Sihab Bhai & Devangiji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2010, 03:14:40 PM »
GUD ONE  Applause Applause Applause
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