Hone de Ghayel muje.......(Ghayel)

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Hone de GHAYEL muje, hunar mera aur nikhar jayega
Zakhm mere dard mere sher mere, aasoo aankh se teri aayega

Hone de zaleel muje, wajood mera kisi ke to kam aayega
Sharmindgi meri beizzati meri ruswaiieeya meri, aur sara shehar muskarayga

Hone de qatl muje, ek main mara to kisi ka kya jayega
lasha mera janaza mera dafne hona mera, baad muddat ke zamana khushiya manayga

                                      -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2009, 02:23:36 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2009, 02:39:04 AM »
Hone de GHAYEL muje, hunar mera aur nikhar jayega
Zakhm mere dard mere sher mere, aasoo aankh se teri aayega

Hone de zaleel muje, wajood mera kisi ke to kam aayega
Sharmindgi meri beizzati meri ruswaiieeya meri, aur sara shehar muskarayga

Hone de qatl muje, ek main mara to kisi ka kya jayega
lasha mera janaza mera dafne hona mera, baad muddat ke zamana khushiya manayga

                                      -Sajid Ghayel-


bahoot dil se likha hai sajid ji apne... Good work


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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2009, 02:44:39 AM »
Waah Bhai Wah, Kya Khoob Likha Hai,.
Ataaullah Khaan JI Ki Tarah,.
Mayyat, Dafan Janaaza Wagaira,.

Nice One Bhai,.
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 02:50:44 AM »
Hone de GHAYEL muje, hunar mera aur nikhar jayega
Zakhm mere dard mere sher mere, aasoo aankh se teri aayega

Hone de zaleel muje, wajood mera kisi ke to kam aayega
Sharmindgi meri beizzati meri ruswaiieeya meri, aur sara shehar muskarayga

Hone de qatl muje, ek main mara to kisi ka kya jayega
lasha mera janaza mera dafne hona mera, baad muddat ke zamana khushiya manayga

                                      -Sajid Ghayel-


Tujhe Ruswaa Main Kaise Hone Doonga,.
Bol Mere Bhai, Tujhe Kaise Rone Doonga,.

Teri To Zindagi, Shayard Tujhpar Meharbaan Nahi,.
Tere Bagair To Yaara, Kisi Mehfil Me Jaan Nahi,.

Hai Tu Jaan "Azeem Ki, Is Se Magar Khafaa Kyun Hai,.
Jab Saath Tere "Main Hoon, To Tu Tanhaa Kyun Hai,.

Kyun "Sajid, Tu Dil Ke Zakhmon Ko Bhulaata Nahi Hai,.
Duniya Mazaak Udaati Hai, Is Se Haal Kyun Chupaata Nahi Hai,.

Mayyat, Maut, Dafan, Janaaze Ki To Baatein Na Karna,.
Hume To Saath Saath Hai Jeena, Aur Saath Saath Hai Marna,.

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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 03:15:50 AM »
Hone de GHAYEL muje, hunar mera aur nikhar jayega
Zakhm mere dard mere sher mere, aasoo aankh se teri aayega

Hone de zaleel muje, wajood mera kisi ke to kam aayega
Sharmindgi meri beizzati meri ruswaiieeya meri, aur sara shehar muskarayga

Hone de qatl muje, ek main mara to kisi ka kya jayega
lasha mera janaza mera dafne hona mera, baad muddat ke zamana khushiya manayga

                                      -Sajid Ghayel-

Wah Bhai! Bahut kamaal ka likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 03:18:13 AM »
Tujhe Ruswaa Main Kaise Hone Doonga,.
Bol Mere Bhai, Tujhe Kaise Rone Doonga,.

Teri To Zindagi, Shayard Tujhpar Meharbaan Nahi,.
Tere Bagair To Yaara, Kisi Mehfil Me Jaan Nahi,.

Hai Tu Jaan "Azeem Ki, Is Se Magar Khafaa Kyun Hai,.
Jab Saath Tere "Main Hoon, To Tu Tanhaa Kyun Hai,.

Kyun "Sajid, Tu Dil Ke Zakhmon Ko Bhulaata Nahi Hai,.
Duniya Mazaak Udaati Hai, Is Se Haal Kyun Chupaata Nahi Hai,.

Mayyat, Maut, Dafan, Janaaze Ki To Baatein Na Karna,.
Hume To Saath Saath Hai Jeena, Aur Saath Saath Hai Marna,.

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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 03:31:24 AM »
Tere jawaab ka to koi jawaab nahi Jaanasheen Bhai

Shukriya Bhai,.

Waise Meri Shayari Itni Ghatiya Hoti Hai,.
Log Pardhte Mushkil Se Hain, Jawaab To Door Ki Baat,.
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2009, 08:17:48 AM »
Hone de GHAYEL muje, hunar mera aur nikhar jayega
Zakhm mere dard mere sher mere, aasoo aankh se teri aayega

Hone de zaleel muje, wajood mera kisi ke to kam aayega
Sharmindgi meri beizzati meri ruswaiieeya meri, aur sara shehar muskarayga

Hone de qatl muje, ek main mara to kisi ka kya jayega
lasha mera janaza mera dafne hona mera, baad muddat ke zamana khushiya manayga

                                      -Sajid Ghayel-


Hmmm... bahut achhe...

ashqon ka jo ye sailaab aayega,
daaman tera kaise inse bach payega,
chahatein bahut thi tujhse aye sanam,
kaise in sab se tu mujhe bhula payega...
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2009, 09:40:49 AM »
kya baat gayelji...

gayelji tu ishq mein to gayel,hote hi raheta hai,
apne hunar aur wajood se, gayel hona yeh manjoor nahi.
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2009, 02:07:47 PM »
Sajid,

Very nice bro Applause

Very touching Thumbs UP

Bohat Shukriyaan Rajbir Jee

bahoot dil se likha hai sajid ji apne... Good work


Nawazish Karam Pooja

Tujhe Ruswaa Main Kaise Hone Doonga,.
Bol Mere Bhai, Tujhe Kaise Rone Doonga,.

Teri To Zindagi, Shayard Tujhpar Meharbaan Nahi,.
Tere Bagair To Yaara, Kisi Mehfil Me Jaan Nahi,.

Hai Tu Jaan "Azeem Ki, Is Se Magar Khafaa Kyun Hai,.
Jab Saath Tere "Main Hoon, To Tu Tanhaa Kyun Hai,.

Kyun "Sajid, Tu Dil Ke Zakhmon Ko Bhulaata Nahi Hai,.
Duniya Mazaak Udaati Hai, Is Se Haal Kyun Chupaata Nahi Hai,.

Mayyat, Maut, Dafan, Janaaze Ki To Baatein Na Karna,.
Hume To Saath Saath Hai Jeena, Aur Saath Saath Hai Marna,.

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Khuda tumhe hamesha khush rakhe chote .......

Main is ummeed me dooba ke tu bacha lega
Ab iske baad kya mera Imtihaa_n lega

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Hmmm... bahut achhe...

ashqon ka jo ye sailaab aayega,
daaman tera kaise inse bach payega,
chahatein bahut thi tujhse aye sanam,
kaise in sab se tu mujhe bhula payega...


Bohat khoobsurat jawab Angel  Clapping Smiley

kya baat gayelji...

gayelji tu ishq mein to gayel,hote hi raheta hai,
apne hunar aur wajood se, gayel hona yeh manjoor nahi.

Bohat shukriyaan Cara and beautiful line by u  Applause
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2009, 02:37:12 PM »
 Applause  Applause  Applause
Bahut khoob likha hai Sajid Ji,

Hone de ghayel mujhe tujhe kya khabar mujhe kya mila hai,
ye teri hi hasratoon ka silsala hai ki mere apno ko mujhse
ka gila hai,

Waqt ki ret ki tarah to haathon se iss tarah fisla hai,
ki tujhe dobara paa bhi nahi sakte tu itni door jo ho chala
hai...

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2009, 02:59:27 PM »
Nice One Sajid ... bahut acche....

Kar ke ghayel muhje who aaj muskurata hai
Dekhe, kab talak who bhi qaraar pata hai
Aata hai hontoon mein ajab muskaan liye
Jate huye, dil mein khangar uthar jata hai!!


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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2009, 04:59:50 PM »
Applause  Applause  Applause
Bahut khoob likha hai Sajid,

Hone de ghayel mujhe tujhe kya khabar mujhe kya mila hai,
ye teri hi hasratoon ka silsala hai ki mere apno ko mujhse
ka gila hai,

Waqt ki ret ki tarah to haathon se iss tarah fisla hai,
ki tujhe dobara paa bhi nahi sakte tu itni door jo ho chala
hai...

Shally.


Taareef aur khoobsurat shero se nawazne ke liye bohat shukriya Shally

Nice One Sajid ... bahut acche....

Kar ke ghayel muhje who aaj muskurata hai
Dekhe, kab talak who bhi qaraar pata hai
Aata hai hontoon mein ajab muskaan liye
Jate huye, dil mein khangar uthar jata hai!!


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Bohat khoob hum tum ek behtareen shayer hi nahi ek behtareen insan aur dost bhi ho Ghayel tumhari dosti ka kayel hain
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2009, 11:45:15 PM »
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Bohat khoob Sajid ji wonderfull creation ... Thumbs UP
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