Hotey hain mukhaatib bhi, to, leytey hain pheyr mukh!

by abdbundeli on April 28, 2009, 10:05:07 AM
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Ab bol-chaal band hai: mein un sey kyaa kahoon?
Un ko yahee pasand hai: mein un sey kyaa kahoon?
Hotey hain mukhaatib bhi, to, leytey hain pheyr mukh;
Yeh koh-e-shab buland hai: mein un sey kyaa kahoon?

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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2009, 10:14:25 AM »
Good one Abd Ji

Roothe hai to manaa lo
Aise kitne din chalega
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k.shael
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2009, 11:39:14 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji,

4 Lines me hi dil ko choo liya.

Shally.
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2009, 01:02:42 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 28, 2009, 10:14:25 AM
Good one Abd Ji

Roothe hai to manaa lo
Aise kitne din chalega

Shukriyah Rajesh Harish ji!

Yeh roothnaa, yeh maan-manouwal, hai zarooree!
Lamhoun mein badhhee, lamhoun mein ghat jaayegee dooree!
Tanhaaiyaan unhain bhi sataayengeen baarahaa;
Taareek shab-e-wasl abhi bhi hai adhooree!!

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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2009, 01:06:09 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on April 28, 2009, 11:39:14 AM
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji,

4 Lines me hi dil ko choo liya.

Shally.

Thanks Shally! I'm happy that it has pleased you!
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2009, 01:08:34 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on April 28, 2009, 10:05:07 AM

Ab bol-chaal band hai: mein un sey kyaa kahoon?
Un ko yahee pasand hai: mein un sey kyaa kahoon?
Hotey hain mukhaatib bhi, to, leytey hain pheyr mukh;
Yeh koh-e-shab buland hai: mein un sey kyaa kahoon?

                                   - abd bundeli



WOH KHAFAA HO MUJHSEY ,YEH UNKI MARZI,

 RANJ ISS BAAT KAA HAI, NAARAAZGI KYAA HAI..!!


NICE ON Abd
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2009, 02:15:43 PM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 28, 2009, 01:08:34 PM
WOH KHAFAA HO MUJHSEY ,YEH UNKI MARZI,
RANJ ISS BAAT KAA HAI, NAARAAZGI KYAA HAI..!!

NICE ON Abd
Thanks khamosh_aawaaz ji!

Na woh bataayengey, kis baat kee hai naaraazee;
Aur, ham bhee naheen poochheyngey, "Sabab kyaa hai jee?"
Roo-b-roo hongey, magar jab bhi: muskuraayengey,
Peysh kartey huye, kalee gulaab kee taazee!

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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2009, 02:37:55 PM »
Wah Wah wah  ABD Ji

meri wah wahi tho sayad na ruke.. itna mast likha hai aapne.. Bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2009, 02:40:49 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on April 28, 2009, 10:05:07 AM

Ab bol-chaal band hai: mein un sey kyaa kahoon?
Un ko yahee pasand hai: mein un sey kyaa kahoon?
Hotey hain mukhaatib bhi, to, leytey hain pheyr mukh;
Yeh koh-e-shab buland hai: mein un sey kyaa kahoon?

                                   - abd bundeli


bahut khoob abd ji..
nice.. bahut achha likha hai
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2009, 02:41:34 PM »
Mashallah Bohat Achche Abd bhaiya,.
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2009, 02:54:40 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on April 28, 2009, 02:37:55 PM
Wah Wah wah  ABD Ji

meri wah wahi tho sayad na ruke.. itna mast likha hai aapne.. Bahoot khoob!

Bahut-bahut shukriyah! Bas, aapkee nazar-e-inaayat hai Sophi  ji!
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2009, 02:56:29 PM »
Quote from: yahiya on April 28, 2009, 02:40:49 PM
bahut khoob abd ji..
nice.. bahut achha likha hai
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, yahiya bhai!
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2009, 02:57:59 PM »
Quote from: Azeem on April 28, 2009, 02:41:34 PM
Mashallah Bohat Achche Abd bhaiya,.
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Azeem bhai!
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