hum mit gai aur tughay khabar nahi

by mom bati on March 03, 2008, 03:04:24 PM
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chupai dil may ghamon ka jahan bathay hain
tumari  bazm may hum  bayzuban bathay hain
yeh aur bat k manzil pay hum pohanch na sakay  
magar yeh kum hay k rahon ko chan bathay hain
feghan hay,dard hay,sozo faraq o daghay allam
abhi  to  ghar  may  boht  mahman bathay hain
aub   aur  gardishay  taqdir  kia  satai   gi
luta  k  ishq  may  nam o  nishan bathay hain
woh aik  lafzay mohabat hi dil ka dushman hay
jisay   sharyatay  ahsas  maan   bathay  hain
hay  maykaday  ki  baharoon  say dosti saghar
darray  haday  yaqin  o  guman   bathay  hain
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2008, 08:12:44 PM »
Very fine work...
Really liked each and every line of this one... 

Please keep writing... Usual Smile
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BAHUT KHOOB..BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI...
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