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Hum se rasm-e ulfat woh is tarah nibhate hain
Hum tou pyaar karte haiN aur woh zulm dhaate hain
Dar badar bhatakte hain thokaren bhi khate hain
Log tub kahin jaa ker manzilon ko paate hain
Is tarah jahaN se hum apna gham chupate hain
Lakh ro raha ho dil phir bhi muskurate hain
Jin se hum ne maangee theen chund lamhon ki Khushiyan
Woh ghamon ki hee saughaat hum ko deke jaate hain
Kaise bawafa hain woh ghar mire nahiN aate
DoosroN ki galiyon men roz dekhe jate hain
Hum nahiN karam apna jo jatayeN sau sau bar
Hum karam kareN bhi tou kar ke bhool jate hain
Dost is zamane meN Khudgaraz hain ai Nira
Jab bhi koii mushkil ho ghair kaam aate haiN
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2009, 08:41:04 PM » |
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bahoot khoob Nira ji!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2009, 05:01:51 PM » |
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Nira di .. bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. bahoot Umda !
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2009, 12:41:58 PM » |
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Waaaaah.. wah wah.... 
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Nira sis...... Bahut dino k baad padne mila
Daad hazir hai ji kabul kijiyega zarur.  rojaaaaaaa sis aapko pasand aayi rachna bahut bahut shukriya. |
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2009, 12:43:05 PM » |
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kaash ji aapki daad ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon |
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2009, 12:43:51 PM » |
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bahoot khoob Nira ji!!
pooja ji bahut bahut shukriya |
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2009, 12:45:20 PM » |
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Wah Kya baat hai Nira Didi.. Dard Ke Sath Jazzbaaton Ko Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Lajawab Rachna Likhi hai aaapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob..
**~** Mann **~**
vicky tumhare saharne ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon' |
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2009, 12:47:27 PM » |
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Nira di .. bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. bahoot Umda !
sophi sis hausla afzaayi aor saharne ki shukrguzaar hoon yunhi saath deti rahiyega take care |
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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2009, 04:58:55 PM » |
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2009, 05:05:28 PM » |
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Bohot hi Khoob Nira Ji
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2009, 04:40:01 AM » |
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aapki hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya nira |
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