Hum tumse juda hokar

by aqsh on September 23, 2012, 10:53:31 AM
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Waqt agar saath deta toh hum tumse juda na hote
Har lamha wafa ka hota gar tum bewafa na hote
Dil se teese na utt thi hum zar zar na rote
Gairon ki tarah hum bhi kabhi apko pyaare hote
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2012, 01:06:10 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hain apne Aqsh ji ,,,,,,

Hamare kehne se bewafa koi bewafa nahi hota
Jiski kismat me likhi hu judai khuda ke ghar me bhi uska milan nahi hota,

Muqaddar bewafa, waqt bewafa jab aaine me dekha khud ko  to ye dil  bhi uska hokar bewafa nikla,
Hume  shikwa e shikyat kis se karte apno ki ruawahi ka khayal basa kar dil se uska har khyal nikla ...!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2012, 02:04:46 PM »
good one Applause Applause
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Sanjeev kash
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2012, 02:31:56 PM »
Good.
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aqsh
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2012, 03:52:32 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hain apne Aqsh ji ,,,,,,

Hamare kehne se bewafa koi bewafa nahi hota
Jiski kismat me likhi hu judai khuda ke ghar me bhi uska milan nahi hota,

Muqaddar bewafa, waqt bewafa jab aaine me dekha khud ko  to ye dil  bhi uska hokar bewafa nikla,
Hume  shikwa e shikyat kis se karte apno ki ruawahi ka khayal basa kar dil se uska har khyal nikla ...!!
teekh kaha aapne kaushal ji
Thnx for ur lovely comment
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2012, 03:54:14 PM »
Good.
thnx a lot sanjeev ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2012, 03:54:54 PM »
good one Applause Applause
thnx bahut bahut mukesh ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2012, 06:15:31 PM »
Waqt agar saath deta toh hum tumse juda na hote
Har lamha wafa ka hota gar tum bewafa na hote
Dil se teese na utt thi hum zar zar na rote
Gairon ki tarah hum bhi kabhi apko pyaare hote


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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2012, 12:47:35 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2012, 02:51:53 AM »
gud 1 dear
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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2012, 04:15:36 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: September 24, 2012, 07:19:42 AM »
very nice.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 24, 2012, 09:58:45 AM »
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thnx@khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2012, 09:59:20 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #14 on: September 24, 2012, 10:00:34 AM »
gud 1 dear
shukriya anmolarora ji
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