HUME TO LUTF MILA HAI...................

by Tanha(Saurabh) on September 26, 2008, 01:40:19 PM
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HUME TO LUTF MILA HAI BALA KA RAHNE DO,
ABHI WAQT LAGEGA PAHLA NASHA JAANE TAK.

ABHI TO LABON PE USKE HI GEET RAHTE HAIN,
JARA THAHRO TO YE NAZM GUNGUNAANE TAK.

MUJHE KHWAHISH HAI KUCHH PAL KO JEE LENE DO,
UNKE BAS EK DAFAA AUR MUSKURAANE TAK.

LAGTA HAI ABHI YE DIL NA MAANEGA,
ABHI TO AUR DUM BAAKI HAI BAAZ AANE TAK.

TUM KAHTE HO UNKO YAAD AAYEN HUM, CHHODO!
BADA WAQT LAGA HOGA MUJHE BHULAANE TAK.

JO DHEERE DHEERE CHAL RAHI HAI KYA CHALNE DEIN?,
HAWA KA RUKH PAHCHAANENGE BAAG UJADJAANE TAK.

US SE MILKAR KHUD KO HI BHOOL BAITHE HAIN,
YAKEEN HOTA NAHI AAEENE KE PAAS AANE TAK.

USI DIYE NE MERA ASHIYAAN JALA DALA,
JISE AARH DE RAHA THA TOOFAAN JAANE TAK.

NAZAR KHWABGAHON KI VEERAAN DEEWAREIN TAKTI HAI,
NEEND AATEE NAHI KOI KHWAB NAYA AANE TAK.

IN RAASTE KE PATTHARON KA ILM THA MUJHKO,
PAR SAMBHALNA CHAHA NAHI THOKAR KHAANE TAK.

CHALO AB ‘TANHA’ APNI YAADON KE SAATH CHALTE HAIN,
INTZAAR HOTA NAHI KISI KE AB UTHAANE TAK.

-----TANHA(SAURABH)
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2008, 01:45:07 PM »
HUME TO LUTF MILA HAI BALA KA RAHNE DO,
ABHI WAQT LAGEGA PAHLA NASHA JAANE TAK.

ABHI TO LABON PE USKE HI GEET RAHTE HAIN,
JARA THAHRO TO YE NAZM GUNGUNAANE TAK.

MUJHE KHWAHISH HAI KUCHH PAL KO JEE LENE DO,
UNKE BAS EK DAFAA AUR MUSKURAANE TAK.

LAGTA HAI ABHI YE DIL NA MAANEGA,
ABHI TO AUR DUM BAAKI HAI BAAZ AANE TAK.

TUM KAHTE HO UNKO YAAD AAYEN HUM, CHHODO!
BADA WAQT LAGA HOGA MUJHE BHULAANE TAK.

JO DHEERE DHEERE CHAL RAHI HAI KYA CHALNE DEIN?,
HAWA KA RUKH PAHCHAANENGE BAAG UJADJAANE TAK.

US SE MILKAR KHUD KO HI BHOOL BAITHE HAIN,
YAKEEN HOTA NAHI AAEENE KE PAAS AANE TAK.

USI DIYE NE MERA ASHIYAAN JALA DALA,
JISE AARH DE RAHA THA TOOFAAN JAANE TAK.

NAZAR KHWABGAHON KI VEERAAN DEEWAREIN TAKTI HAI,
NEEND AATEE NAHI KOI KHWAB NAYA AANE TAK.

IN RAASTE KE PATTHARON KA ILM THA MUJHKO,
PAR SAMBHALNA CHAHA NAHI THOKAR KHAANE TAK.

CHALO AB ‘TANHA’ APNI YAADON KE SAATH CHALTE HAIN,
INTZAAR HOTA NAHI KISI KE AB UTHAANE TAK.

-----TANHA(SAURABH)


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Sach mein bahut khoobsurat nazam likhi hai aapne Saurabh..
Ek ek sheir kamaal ka hai.. Applause

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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2008, 01:56:03 PM »
 Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI
TANHA JI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2008, 01:58:57 PM »
thanks alot Mahiya ji, shael ji!

NA HUMNE KISI KO CHAHA KABHI, KISI NE HUME NA GAWARA KIYA,
FIR PATA NAHI KIN LAMHON NE, IS SAARI DUNIYA KO HUMARA KIYA.


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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2008, 02:04:02 PM »
bhai sourabh padhkar jaban to taalu se chipki hi rah gai..kamal likha hai tumne,
beshaq tum yoindia parivaar ke ek sammanit sadasy ho,
itni behtreen poetry ke liye aapka aabhar
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2008, 02:07:58 PM »
Bohat, bohat, bohat shukriya Sanjeev ji....
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2008, 04:50:20 PM »
Kamaal ka likha hai aapne Saurabh ji... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 26, 2008, 04:59:03 PM »
sukriya honey ji.... app ne saraha....
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Mila to hai yaaron ka saath,
               par main hi kisi mod par kahin chhoot jata hoon,
Khud ke nishan-e-kadam hain meri raahon pe,
               khud ka hi saath safar-e-zindgi me paata hoon.
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«Reply #8 on: September 26, 2008, 09:53:38 PM »
bohot khoob likha hai saurabh!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 26, 2008, 11:47:56 PM »
bahot bahot dhanyavaad sanya ji apka,
apne ise padha aur saraha....
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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2008, 12:33:52 AM »
HUME TO LUTF MILA HAI BALA KA RAHNE DO,
ABHI WAQT LAGEGA PAHLA NASHA JAANE TAK.

ABHI TO LABON PE USKE HI GEET RAHTE HAIN,
JARA THAHRO TO YE NAZM GUNGUNAANE TAK.

MUJHE KHWAHISH HAI KUCHH PAL KO JEE LENE DO,
UNKE BAS EK DAFAA AUR MUSKURAANE TAK.

LAGTA HAI ABHI YE DIL NA MAANEGA,
ABHI TO AUR DUM BAAKI HAI BAAZ AANE TAK.

TUM KAHTE HO UNKO YAAD AAYEN HUM, CHHODO!
BADA WAQT LAGA HOGA MUJHE BHULAANE TAK.

JO DHEERE DHEERE CHAL RAHI HAI KYA CHALNE DEIN?,
HAWA KA RUKH PAHCHAANENGE BAAG UJADJAANE TAK.

US SE MILKAR KHUD KO HI BHOOL BAITHE HAIN,
YAKEEN HOTA NAHI AAEENE KE PAAS AANE TAK.

USI DIYE NE MERA ASHIYAAN JALA DALA,
JISE AARH DE RAHA THA TOOFAAN JAANE TAK.

NAZAR KHWABGAHON KI VEERAAN DEEWAREIN TAKTI HAI,
NEEND AATEE NAHI KOI KHWAB NAYA AANE TAK.

IN RAASTE KE PATTHARON KA ILM THA MUJHKO,
PAR SAMBHALNA CHAHA NAHI THOKAR KHAANE TAK.

CHALO AB ‘TANHA’ APNI YAADON KE SAATH CHALTE HAIN,
INTZAAR HOTA NAHI KISI KE AB UTHAANE TAK.

-----TANHA(SAURABH)


Bohot bohot khoob Saurabh  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohot ki kamaal ka likha hai..

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«Reply #11 on: September 27, 2008, 12:59:53 AM »
bahot bahot dhanyavaad apka Celmira ji
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