is dil ko phir sazaye na di...

by sapnaa on September 29, 2007, 03:59:12 PM
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Sadaaye deni thi jisko,usse sadaaye na di..
Mere naseeb ne phir,kam mujhe sazaaye na di...
Milli hai virse mein mujhe ghamo ki dhoop...
mujhe kisi farishte ne kabhi duuayein na di...

Woh zehar deta tho sab ki nazro mein aa jata
usne bhi kuch yuh kiya,zakhm dete raha mujhe..
aur kabhi davaayein na di...

usse aakhri salaam karke...
main mere safar pe chal padi thi
aur uss zaalim ne mujhe ,phir  kabhi awaaz bhi na di...

woh bewafa keh laaega,logon ki har mehfil mein...
par usse itni shiddat se chaaha hai maine...
ke log usse bewafa kahe aur main chup rahu...
mere dil ne mujhe yeh izzazat na di...

udhi thi baat logon mein yeh..
par dab dab si gayi
humne kaha hum khud se juda ho gaye...
woh bewafa hai,yeh to ek afwah hai..
shareef log te...
afwayen ko hawayein na di...

phir na karoongi kisi se mohabat is kadar...
maine uske baad kabhi is dil ko bewajeh sazaaye na di...
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2007, 04:42:12 PM »
supebbb Sapnaa ji.....very very nice.

dil tadap ke reh gaya lekin yeh tadap usse sunayi na di
hum aahein bharte rahe..magar usse dikhayi na di
karte rahe ta-umr uska intzaar..magar usse fursta na mili aane ki
jab usse khabar pahunchi ..to ghadi aa gayi hamare hi duniya se chale jaane ki
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Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2007, 06:48:01 PM »
Sapnaa

Excellent ! =D> =D> =D>

Bahut he achcha kalam aap ne pesh kiya hai. Daad kabool kijiye.

Niks

Nice reply.
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ISHPREET
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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2007, 08:36:29 PM »
Beautiful words...Beautiful Emotions....
sapnaa excellent one....lots of emotions in that ghazal by you....too good..
 =D>  =D>  =D>
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2007, 04:30:39 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB SAPNAA..BEAUTIFUL ONE...
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2007, 06:06:16 PM »
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phir na karoongi kisi se mohabat is kadar...
maine uske baad kabhi is dil ko bewajeh sazaaye na di...


Superb Sapnaa =D>  =D>
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2007, 11:43:41 PM »
Waaah Kamaal ka likha hai Sapna....!!!

Khawabon me hee de dete hume tawazzoo.....
Ke Kadam toh hum apne Sambhal  hee lete....!!!
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faiiz_76
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«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2007, 02:34:45 AM »
very nice sapna jee.
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sapnaa
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2007, 05:31:49 PM »
Thanx a lot nikki,rajbir,ishpreet,khwaish,roja,badnaam shayar,faiz..
Bahut Bahut shukriya aap sab ka... Usual Smile
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sapnaa
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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2007, 05:43:55 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
supebbb Sapnaa ji.....very very nice.

dil tadap ke reh gaya lekin yeh tadap usse sunayi na di
hum aahein bharte rahe..magar usse dikhayi na di
karte rahe ta-umr uska intzaar..magar usse fursta na mili aane ki
jab usse khabar pahunchi ..to ghadi aa gayi hamare hi duniya se chale jaane ki


wow...too good nikki...bahut acha likha hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2007, 07:46:56 PM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob sapnaa .... yah line kamal ki lagi>>

Sadaaye deni thi jisko,usse sadaaye na di..
Mere naseeb ne phir,kam mujhe sazaaye na di...
Milli hai virse mein mujhe ghamo ki dhoop...
mujhe kisi farishte ne kabhi duuayein na di...



Nikki the Great, bahoot hi acha reply likha hai... Good job both!!!
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SHONA
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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2007, 08:47:57 PM »
Beautiful one sapnaa..written with lots of intensity...
very nice =D>  =D>  =D>
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