jab duur chla jaon ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

by Arifa on January 02, 2005, 05:43:23 PM
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aey sanam tujh say mien jab duur chla jaon ga
yaad rekhna kay tujhae yaad bhat aonga

yeh milan or yeh hasinn raat najanay kab ho
aj kay baad mulaqaat na jannnay kab ho
ab teray sher musafir ki trhan aonga

chand kay akss mien suraj ki haseen kirno mien
jheel kay aienay mien bhettay hoa jherno mien
in nzaron mien tujhae mien hi nazer aonga
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: January 02, 2005, 08:49:52 PM »
niceeeeeeeeee!

kushkismat hote hum jo woh hume yaad karte,
sapne me hi sahi par hume unne betaab karte!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #2 on: January 02, 2005, 09:40:31 PM »
wow very nice arifa ji......aur meena ji.....

Hasrtain Bayqayas hoti hain..
Sortain Gam Shanas Hoti Hain..
Jin k Hontoon par Ho Muskrahat ..
Un ki Ankhain Udaas hoty hain.................
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Arifa
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«Reply #3 on: January 02, 2005, 10:18:03 PM »
thanks meena and waheed......................



woh meri trhan riyazt tou keray mernay ki
woh meri trhan tamnaon ko marray tou sahi
phir mien ek hasti hoe subhaa ossay laker dongi
raat woh meray liyae rooo ker guzzarae tou sahi
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2005, 05:49:00 AM »
Quote from: "Arifa"
aey sanam tujh say mien jab duur chla jaon ga
yaad rekhna kay tujhae yaad bhat aonga

yeh milan or yeh hasinn raat najanay kab ho
aj kay baad mulaqaat na jannnay kab ho
ab teray sher musafir ki trhan aonga

chand kay akss mien suraj ki haseen kirno mien
jheel kay aienay mien bhettay hoa jherno mien
in nzaron mien tujhae mien hi nazer aonga


Bohat khoob Arifa....
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Arifa
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2005, 03:03:59 PM »
thankssssssssssss aryaan ji
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stalin
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2005, 06:46:40 PM »
"gulshan me nasheman ko mere ye keh ke jalaya mali ne
 jab koi nasheman jalta hai gulshan me ujala hota hai"
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Arifa
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2005, 01:36:27 AM »
very nice stalin ........... aap nasheman kay jalnay ki baat karta ho


mohabbatoo ka ajab karrobar hum nay kiya
 woh baywaffa tha phir bhi pyar hum nay kiya
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2005, 01:39:39 AM »
Your shayari is really awesome ArifaJi!

khud ko uske dard-e-judai mein bikher dala...
bas ab is mohabbat ke raste chalna nahi,...
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stalin
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2005, 02:36:58 PM »
"par katar ke mujhse kehta hai gulshan se nikal
 aisi bepar ki to na udata tha saiyaad kabhi"
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Arifa
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2005, 04:08:37 PM »
EXCELLENT  STALIN  BOHAT ACHAH LIKHA HAI AAP NAY


bhaat duur kahien ander tabhai mucha daytay hain
woh ashk jo ankhon say baeh nahin patay hain
tumharay sath rehna bhi mushkil hay bhaat
aur bin tumharay bhi hum raeh nahin patay hain
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stalin
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2005, 06:48:26 PM »
"raste bhar ro-ro ke poochha
humse paon ke chhalon ne
basti kitni door basali
dil me basne walo ne
dil ka ghamon se rishta kya hai
ishq ka hasil aansoo kyon hai
humko kita jahar pilaya
in bedard sawalon ne"
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #12 on: January 05, 2005, 11:56:42 AM »
Wo......ow stalin kya khob likha hai. N nice job by all.
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stalin
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«Reply #13 on: January 05, 2005, 08:02:15 PM »
thanx and keep it up to hate love
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«Reply #14 on: January 05, 2005, 08:08:20 PM »
wonderful stuff by everyone..........
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