jab paas the tum

by saahill on March 20, 2012, 10:04:00 AM
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jindagi jeene ke andaaz hi kuch our they
jab paas they tum to ehsaas hi kuch aur they .

likhte hain ab to hum to mukhlisi ko sochkar
paas they tum to khayalaat hi kuch our they .

allam yeh hai ab to hota nahi ikraar koi
ek woh pal tha jab izhaarat hi kuch our they .

jab paas the tum to ehsaas hi kuch our they

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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2012, 10:14:21 AM »
third line clear naheen hai zaraa fir se dekho. bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2012, 02:00:43 PM »
saini sir ab checjk kar lijiye and thx for correction
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