janaze me na aana

by aftab alam on September 13, 2010, 06:39:41 PM
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laut jati hai lehre gum hamara dekh kar jaise laut jati hai
machhli kinara dekh kar tu hamare janaze me na aana
kahin fir zinda na ho jao tera chehra dekh kar
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2010, 06:54:43 PM »
Aaftaab Sahab AadaaB!

Aapke khayaal to kafi gehre lage hume... par aap lafzoN meiN dhaal nahi paye, Khair likhate rahiye........ Ummid hai aap achchi shayari karna sikh jayeNge..... Usual Smile
       



Tuu khush raheN yehi khushi raheNgi mujhko
Teri muskuraahat pe muskurata rahuN maiN

     


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«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2010, 07:11:53 PM »
laut jati hai lehre gum hamara dekh kar jaise laut jati hai
machhli kinara dekh kar tu hamare janaze me na aana
kahin fir zinda na ho jao tera chehra dekh kar

bht achche khyal hain aftab ji...

behtar ho sakta hai

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«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2010, 07:13:05 PM »
Aaftaab Sahab AadaaB!

Aapke khayaal to kafi gehre lage hume... par aap lafzoN meiN dhaal nahi paye, Khair likhate rahiye........ Ummid hai aap achchi shayari karna sikh jayeNge..... Usual Smile
       



Tuu khush raheN yehi khushi raheNgi mujhko
Teri muskuraahat pe muskurata rahuN maiN

     



teri muskaan k sadke ee mere humdum
tu kahe to ashk chhupa muskurate rahen hum...
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2010, 07:26:33 PM »
teri muskaan k sadke ee mere humdum
tu kahe to ashk chhupa muskurate rahen hum...



Tuu muskura aise ke gul bhi sharmsaar ho jayeN
BahareN barse tujhi pe sab ko tujhse pyaar ho jayeN

     

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«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2010, 07:30:09 PM »

Tuu muskura aise ke gul bhi sharmsaar ho jayeN
BahareN barse tujhi pe sab ko tujhse pyaar ho jayeN

     



inn baharon ne mujhse hi to muskurana sikha hai
mujhe dekh hi chand sitaron ne chamakna sikha hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2012, 04:11:57 PM »
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BANSI DHAMEJA
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2012, 04:53:09 PM »
laut jati hai lehren gum hamara dekh kar
jaise laut jati hai machhli kinara dekh kar
tu hamare janaze me na aana kahin fir
zinda na ho jaun tera chehra dekh kar
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bura na manayeega mere dost
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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2012, 12:03:18 AM »
laut jati hai lehre gum hamara dekh kar jaise laut jati hai
machhli kinara dekh kar tu hamare janaze me na aana
kahin fir zinda na ho jao tera chehra dekh kar

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meri zindagi ek uski hi amanat thi
wo gaya, mein gayi...sab gaya
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