jati hu mai (nam)

by poonamA on August 07, 2013, 03:13:29 PM
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aankho me din raat ansoo sajati hu mai
bujh gai chiraag ab khud ko jalati hu mai

door tujhse rahkar kush nahi hu mai
bas logon ki khatir muskurati hu mai

din beet jata hai aur dhal jati hai shaam
tere aane ki umeed se dil ko bahlati hu mai

tham ke hathon me phool na anna  pade tumhe
gar maut ki taraf kadam jo badati hu mai

muddaton se kiya hai intizaar tera
thak gayee hu  ab chali jati hu mai

fursat nahi ab na kijiyega bahana
tere kandhoo per he ab jana chahti hu mai 

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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2013, 03:52:38 PM »
Quote from: poonamA on August 07, 2013, 03:13:29 PM
aankho me din raat ansoo sajati hu mai
bujh gai chiraag ab khud ko jalati hu mai

door tujhse rahkar kush nahi hu mai
bas logon ki khatir muskurati hu mai

din beet jata hai aur dhal jati hai shaam
tere aane ki umeed se dil ko bahlati hu mai

tham ke hathon me phool na anna  pade tumhe
gar maut ki taraf kadam jo badati hu mai

muddaton se kiya hai intizaar tera
thak gayee hu  ab chali jati hu mai

fursat nahi ab na kijiyega bahana
tere kandhoo per he ab jana chahti hu mai 




nive ,ma'am
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2013, 04:18:01 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

khubsurat peshkash poonama ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2013, 06:17:17 PM »
बहुत खूब....पूनम जी..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2013, 06:25:47 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2013, 07:25:49 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2013, 09:12:42 PM »
Quote from: poonamA on August 07, 2013, 03:13:29 PM
aankho me din raat ansoo sajati hu mai
bujh gai chiraag ab khud ko jalati hu mai

door tujhse rahkar kush nahi hu mai
bas logon ki khatir muskurati hu mai

din beet jata hai aur dhal jati hai shaam
tere aane ki umeed se dil ko bahlati hu mai

tham ke hathon me phool na anna  pade tumhe
gar maut ki taraf kadam jo badati hu mai

muddaton se kiya hai intizaar tera
thak gayee hu  ab chali jati hu mai

fursat nahi ab na kijiyega bahana
tere kandhoo per he ab jana chahti hu mai 



bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2013, 10:28:16 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kya kehne Poonam ji, ek dum dhamaakedaar likhaa hai aapne, one of your best creations till date, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2013, 10:46:19 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Poonam jee bahut khoob likha hai apne..Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2013, 09:12:23 AM »
wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2013, 10:59:28 AM »
good one
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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2013, 03:12:17 PM »
shukriya sabhi ko
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2013, 03:27:46 PM »
bohut khub poonam ji waah
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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2013, 03:29:18 PM »
thx saahill
Quote from: saahill on August 08, 2013, 03:27:46 PM
bohut khub poonam ji waah
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